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Author: wblock
Date: Sun Jan  5 22:52:50 2014
New Revision: 43438
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43438

Log:
  Miscellaneous punctuation and markup fixes.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sun Jan  5 22:45:51 2014	(r43437)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sun Jan  5 22:52:50 2014	(r43438)
@@ -2490,7 +2490,7 @@ ControlPersist yes</screen>
     <example>
       <title>Commit Log for a Commit Needing Approval</title>
 
-      <para>You want to commit a port You have collaborated with
+      <para>You want to commit a port.  You have collaborated with
 	the listed MAINTAINER, who has told you to go ahead and
 	commit.</para>
 
@@ -3020,7 +3020,7 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
       the analysis results of the automated
       <application>Coverity</application> runs, can sign up at <uri
 	xlink:href="http://scan.coverity.com/">Coverity
-	Scan</uri></para>
+	Scan</uri>.</para>
 
     <para>The &os; wiki includes a mini-guide for developers who are
       interested in working with the &coverity; analysis reports: <uri
@@ -3810,8 +3810,8 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
 	      Contributors List.</para>
 
 	    <para>Close the PR if the port came in as a PR.  To close
-	      a PR, just do <userinput>edit-pr
-		PR#</userinput> on
+	      a PR, just do <command>edit-pr
+		<replaceable>PR#</replaceable></command> on
 	      <systemitem>freefall</systemitem> and change the
 	      <varname>state</varname> from <constant>open</constant>
 	      to <constant>closed</constant>.  You will be asked to
@@ -3908,14 +3908,13 @@ MFC after:          1 month</programlist
 		<para>Figure out when the port was removed.  Use this
 		  <link
 		    xlink:href="http://people.freebsd.org/~crees/removed_ports/index.xml">list</link>
-		  and then copy the last living revision of the port:
+		  and then copy the last living revision of the
+		  port:</para>
 
 		  <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/category
-		  </userinput>
-&prompt.user; <userinput>svn cp 'svn+ssh://svn.freebsd.org/ports/head/category/portname/@{YYYY-MM-DD}' portname
-		  </userinput></screen>
+</userinput>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn cp 'svn+ssh://svn.freebsd.org/ports/head/category/portname/@{YYYY-MM-DD}' portname</userinput></screen>
 
-		  Pick a date that is before the removal but after the
+		  <para>Pick a date that is before the removal but after the
 		  last true commit.</para>
 	      </step>