Date: Thu, 31 Aug 2006 18:03:44 +0200 From: Christian Brueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org> To: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@freebsd.org> Cc: cvs-src@freebsd.org, Daniel Gerzo <danger@freebsd.org>, src-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: [src] cvs commit: src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common new.sgml Message-ID: <20060831160344.GA1758@haakonia.hitnet.RWTH-Aachen.DE> In-Reply-To: <44F70528.1030100@freebsd.org> References: <200608311453.k7VErvIH050852@repoman.freebsd.org> <20060831145406.5900716A613@hub.freebsd.org> <1527203135.20060831171432@rulez.sk> <44F70528.1030100@freebsd.org>
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--jI8keyz6grp/JLjh Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Thu, Aug 31, 2006 at 08:50:00AM -0700, Bruce A. Mah wrote: > If memory serves me right, Daniel Gerzo wrote: > > Hello Bruce, > >=20 > > Thursday, August 31, 2006, 4:54:06 PM, you wrote: > >=20 > >> bmah 2006-08-31 14:53:57 UTC > >=20 > >> FreeBSD src repository > >=20 > >> Modified files: (Branch: RELENG_5) > >> release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common new.sgml=20 > >=20 > >> + <para><application>netcat</application> has been updated from the > >> + version in a 4 February 2005 OpenBSD snapshot to the version > >> + included in OpenBSD 3.9.</para> > >> + > >=20 > > Maybe it should be better to write it like: > >=20 > > netcat has been updated from the version included in OpenBSD snapshot > > as of February 4th 2005 to the version included in OpenBSD 3.9. ? >=20 > Hey Daniel-- >=20 > I think that what I wrote is grammatically correct, in that "4 February > 2005" modifies "OpenBSD snapshot". I don't have any objections if you > want to change it, although in your text you should probably do s/in > OpenBSD snapshot/in an OpenBSD snapshot/. Also I personally don't write > dates as "February 4th 2005" but I'm probably not the right person to > wave the consistency banner either. :-) >=20 > I'll think about it some more when I'm next in the file (if you haven't > already changed it, that is). (This text now exists on HEAD, RELENG_6, > and RELENG_5.) >=20 FYI, your entry looks perfectly fine to me. - Christian --=20 Christian Brueffer chris@unixpages.org brueffer@FreeBSD.org GPG Key: http://people.freebsd.org/~brueffer/brueffer.key.asc GPG Fingerprint: A5C8 2099 19FF AACA F41B B29B 6C76 178C A0ED 982D --jI8keyz6grp/JLjh Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.5 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFE9whgbHYXjKDtmC0RAhGaAKDnKgEL6eGDwkFXFWQ1Jz6uObgSUACgq8dy zxPegn3YwU9B7S218dNhLS0= =inD9 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --jI8keyz6grp/JLjh--
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