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Date:      Thu, 28 Nov 2013 14:34:58 -0700 (MST)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To:        Taras Korenko <ds@ukrhub.net>
Cc:        freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: en/handbook/users: proposed corrections
Message-ID:  <alpine.BSF.2.00.1311281433350.50600@wonkity.com>
In-Reply-To: <20131128073453.GA52681@gamma.ukrhub.net>
References:  <20131126190644.GC25578@gamma.ukrhub.net> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1311270927350.64907@wonkity.com> <20131128073453.GA52681@gamma.ukrhub.net>

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On Thu, 28 Nov 2013, Taras Korenko wrote:

>  There's a second lap, which includes received suggestions.

One note:

@@ -960,7 +957,7 @@
      <para>In this example, the argument to <option>-m</option> is a
        comma-delimited list of users who are to be added to the group.
        Unlike the previous example, these users are appended to the
-      group list and do not replace the list of existing users in the
+      group and do not replace the list of existing users in the
        group.</para>

s/do not replace the list of/do not replace/

Otherwise, looks good!



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