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Subject: ports/28982: errors in the vnelvis(1V) man page
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>Number:         28982
>Category:       ports
>Synopsis:       errors in the vnelvis(1V) man page
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-ports
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Jul 14 23:40:00 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Bruce Dang
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
Boys & Girls Clubs
>Environment:
FreeBSD epsilon.guarded.net 4.3-STABLE FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE #2: Tue Jul 10 16:46:01 PDT 2001     root@epsilon.guarded.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/EPSILON  i386
>Description:
DESCRIPTION should at least have 'vnelvis' to start with.  "It is preferrable to .." does not make sense.  "..must have a terminal capable of displaying Vietnamese, e.g. or" should have some examples of Vietnamese-capable terms. A few other minor errors were also found.
>How-To-Repeat:
Installing vnelvis from /usr/ports/vietnamese/vnelvis and read the man page.

>Fix:
- replace "is an adaptation of ..." with "vnelvis is an adaptation of .."
- replace "... preferable to because ... " with " ... preferable to others because ..."
- replace "allows user to edit ..." with "vnelvis allows use to edit ..."
- replace "... have a terminal capable of displaying Vietnamese, e.g., or" with "... have a terminal capable of displaying Vietnamese, e.g., vnterm."
- replace "The default settings is ..." with "The default setting is ..."
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:

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