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Subject: svn commit: r47744 -
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Author: bcr
Date: Thu Nov  5 15:49:40 2015
New Revision: 47744
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47744

Log:
  Rephrase a sentence to avoid a typo (to in) and a redundant "following".

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml	Thu Nov  5 12:53:27 2015	(r47743)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/virtualization/chapter.xml	Thu Nov  5 15:49:40 2015	(r47744)
@@ -1273,8 +1273,9 @@ crw-------   1 root  wheel  0x1a1 Mar 17
       <title>Persistent Configuration</title>
 
       <para>In order to configure the system to start
-	<application>bhyve</application> guests at boot time, add
-	the following entries to in the following files:</para>
+	<application>bhyve</application> guests at boot time, the
+	following configurations must be made in the specified
+	files:</para>
 
       <procedure>
 	<step>