Date: Tue, 7 Dec 2004 21:02:37 +0000 From: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> To: Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org> Cc: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml Message-ID: <20041207210237.GQ513@submonkey.net> In-Reply-To: <200412071928.iB7JSYvp099127@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <200412071928.iB7JSYvp099127@repoman.freebsd.org>
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--UTjKcilERHWBCdCp Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Tue, Dec 07, 2004 at 07:28:34PM +0000, Hiten Pandya wrote: > hmp 2004-12-07 19:28:34 UTC >=20 > FreeBSD doc repository >=20 > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml=20 > Log: > Correct last commit. > =20 > Noticed by: trhodes, ceri Thanks Hiten. I still think the sentence is still backwards though. > | @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ > | discussing <acronym>MLS</acronym>. A sensitivity level is > | a term used to describe how important or secret the data > | should be. As the sensitivity level increases, so does the > | - importance of the secrecy (or confidentiality) of the date.</para> > | + importance of the secrecy, or confidentiality of the data.</para> I think it should read: As the confidentiality of the data or importance of the secrecy increases, so does the sensitivity level. Ceri --=20 Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former. -- Einstein (attrib.) --UTjKcilERHWBCdCp Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.6 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFBthptocfcwTS3JF8RAlAyAJsF9gG2GahMiLbZQFBUYnTWdeZp5gCeP4tC thLXbkEEcVtwkUkicwLvCmE= =DLM3 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --UTjKcilERHWBCdCp--
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