From owner-svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.ORG Tue May 21 14:35:31 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1C87AFE; Tue, 21 May 2013 14:35:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxout1.bln1.prohost.de (mxout1.bln1.prohost.de [213.160.84.47]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 806DA694; Tue, 21 May 2013 14:35:26 +0000 (UTC) Received: from Benedicts-Macbook-Pro.local (p4FC712EC.dip0.t-ipconnect.de [79.199.18.236]) (authenticated bits=0) by mx1.bln1.prohost.de (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id r4LEZHu3029983 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NO); Tue, 21 May 2013 16:35:18 +0200 Message-ID: <519B8626.30405@FreeBSD.org> Date: Tue, 21 May 2013 16:35:18 +0200 From: Benedict Reuschling Organization: The FreeBSD Project User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.8; rv:17.0) Gecko/20130509 Thunderbird/17.0.6 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Warren Block Subject: Re: svn commit: r41667 - in projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: basics users References: <201305190001.r4J01wQe092105@svn.freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: X-Enigmail-Version: 1.5.1 OpenPGP: id=4A819348 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Null-Tag: 2b95314db5dabdaf1957ba1861757e42 Cc: svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.org, Tom Rhodes , doc-committers@FreeBSD.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list Reply-To: bcr@FreeBSD.org List-Id: SVN commit messages for doc projects trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 21 May 2013 14:35:31 -0000 -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Am 21.05.13 16:32, schrieb Warren Block: > On Sun, 19 May 2013, Tom Rhodes wrote: > >> Author: trhodes Date: Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013 New Revision: >> 41667 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41667 >> >> Log: Add more information on binary formats in basics. Add a >> note about sudo in the users chapter. Add a section on using root >> in the users chapter. >> >> Modified: >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml >> >> >> >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml >> >> >> Modified: >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml >> >> >> >> ============================================================================== >> >> --- >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml >> >> Sat May 18 23:44:23 2013 (r41666) +++ >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml >> >> Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013 (r41667) @@ -302,6 +302,15 @@ >> console none managing requests for hardware devices, >> peripherals, memory, and CPU time fairly to each user. >> >> + Much more information about User Accounts is in the >> chapter > > It seems odd to capitalize "user accounts" there. > >> + about accounts. For now you >> just + need to know that each person (user) who uses the >> computer should be + given their own username and password. >> The system keeps track + of the people using the computer >> based on this username. Since + it is often the case that >> several people are working on the same + project Unix also >> provides groups. Several users can be placed > > Needs a comma after "project". > > Did not look at the rest, maybe later. Also, the use of "you" is discouraged in the handbook. Benedict -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.8 (Darwin) Comment: GPGTools - http://gpgtools.org Comment: Using GnuPG with Thunderbird - http://www.enigmail.net/ iEUEARECAAYFAlGbhiUACgkQTSZQLkqBk0hMPwCcC9OxxUkV7vQFt9cE7SmoHXBD msIAl3zKCreAOEoWS8gQTu3eQFhrLkc= =JNV4 -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----