From owner-freebsd-doc Sun Jan 5 14:42: 6 2003 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 51CFB37B401 for ; Sun, 5 Jan 2003 14:42:05 -0800 (PST) Received: from smtp.eos.ocn.ne.jp (eos.ocn.ne.jp [211.6.83.117]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id ADA9A43EE1 for ; Sun, 5 Jan 2003 14:42:04 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp) Received: from mail.allbsd.org (p8145-adsao12honb4-acca.tokyo.ocn.ne.jp [219.161.139.145]) by smtp.eos.ocn.ne.jp (Postfix) with ESMTP id A7BB02BEE for ; Mon, 6 Jan 2003 07:42:03 +0900 (JST) Received: from localhost (alph.allbsd.org [192.168.0.10]) by mail.allbsd.org (8.12.3/3.7W/DomainMaster) with ESMTP id h05Mf1B2017765 for ; Mon, 6 Jan 2003 07:41:01 +0900 (JST) (envelope-from hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp) Date: Mon, 06 Jan 2003 07:39:59 +0900 (JST) Message-Id: <20030106.073959.104035916.hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp> To: doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: a relnotes/common/new.sgml patch From: Hiroki Sato X-PGPkey-fingerprint: BDB3 443F A5DD B3D0 A530 FFD7 4F2C D3D8 2793 CF2D X-Mailer: Mew version 2.2 on Emacs 20.7 / Mule 4.0 (HANANOEN) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: Text/Plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Hi, I found some unsuitable sentences during translation of relnotes/common/new.sgml, and made a patch for that. Could anyone review this? 1) What does "tx(4) supports true multicast filtering" mean? I guess tx(4) had partial support of multicast filtering, and now it has full support of it. If it is correct, the word "true" is opaque. 2) For consistency, ia64's MCA records should be written as "machine check architecture records," not "machine check records." -- | Hiroki SATO Index: new.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.468 diff -d -u -I\$FreeBSD:.*\$ -I\$Id:.*\$ -I\$hrs:.*\$ -r1.468 new.sgml --- new.sgml 30 Dec 2002 21:18:04 -0000 1.468 +++ new.sgml 5 Jan 2003 21:53:32 -0000 @@ -888,7 +888,7 @@ The &man.ti.4; driver correctly masks VLAN tags. &merged; - The &man.tx.4; driver now supports true multicast + The &man.tx.4; driver now has full support of multicast filtering. The &man.txp.4; driver has been added to support NICs @@ -3025,7 +3025,7 @@ manpages) or if the running user is root. - The mca utility, for decoding machine check + The mca utility, for decoding Machine Check Architecture records, has been added. The &man.mdmfs.8; command has been added; it is a wrapper To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message