Date: Fri, 20 Jul 2001 17:12:01 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200107210012.f6L0C1I50316@freefall.freebsd.org>
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murray 2001/07/20 17:12:01 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups chapter.sgml
Log:
* Remove call for contributions from the synopsis of this chapter. A
call for help is listed on the third page of the printed Handbook or
on the top level index for the HTML version and it need not be
repeated here.
* End all list items with a period, not just some of them.
* Reword a couple of sentences so that they don't start with command
names.
* Reword a couple of confusing run-on sentences into more succinct
sentences with a separate <note> with additional information.
* Add a couple of missing words and remove some extra words to
construct sentences that make sense.
* Reworded paragraph with awkward "Either .. alternatively"
construction.
* Correct a reference to the Amanda port so that it looks good in
printed form. Dima's <port> tag would be helpful here.
* Fix a couple of other minor typos.
Revision Changes Path
1.37 +99 -69 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/backups/chapter.sgml
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