From owner-freebsd-doc Mon Sep 30 7:10:49 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7639D37B401; Mon, 30 Sep 2002 07:10:48 -0700 (PDT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 26DD243E42; Mon, 30 Sep 2002 07:10:48 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (murray@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6) with ESMTP id g8UEAmCo024092; Mon, 30 Sep 2002 07:10:48 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from murray@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from murray@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6/Submit) id g8UEAlvT024088; Mon, 30 Sep 2002 07:10:47 -0700 (PDT) Date: Mon, 30 Sep 2002 07:10:47 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely Message-Id: <200209301410.g8UEAlvT024088@freefall.freebsd.org> To: martin@sumuk.de, murray@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/43260: [PATCH] various fixes for ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Synopsis: [PATCH] various fixes for ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: murray State-Changed-When: Mon Sep 30 07:10:01 PDT 2002 State-Changed-Why: Your changes have been submitted. I also noticed some other problems in that chapter, and corrected some of them. If you want to spend some more time on this, there is a lot of very poor English grammar that could be improved. Thanks for your submissions! http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=43260 To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message