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On Thursday 13 November 2003 09:54, Ceri Davies wrote:
> On Thu, Nov 13, 2003 at 08:34:48AM -0800, Wes Peters wrote:
> > +	<listitem>
> > +	  <para><application>CUPS</application>, the Common UNIX Printing
> > +	    System, provides a portable printing layer for &unix;-based
> > +	    operating systems.  It has been developed by Easy Software
> > +	    Products to promote a standard printing solution for all
> > &unix; +	    vendors and users.</para>
> > +	  <para><application>CUPS</application> uses the Internet
> > Printing
>
> Please add another newline between </para> and <para>.

Oh, good, I prefer it that way.  I thought I was mimicing what I saw in 
the LPRng section above, but it doesn't have multiple paragraphs.

> > +	    Protocol (<acronym>IPP</acronym>) as the basis for managing
> > +	    print jobs and queues. The Line Printer Daemon
>
>                                   ^
> Add another space.

Ah, durnit.  ;^)

> > +	    (<acronym>LPD</acronym>) Server Message Block
> > +	    (<acronym>SMB</acronym>), and AppSocket (a.k.a. JetDirect)
> > +	    protocols are also supported with reduced functionality. 
> > CUPS +	    adds network printer browsing and PostScript Printer
> > Description +	    (<acronym>PPD</acronym>) based printing options
> > to support +	    real-world printing under &unix;.</para>
> > +	  <para>The main site for <application>CUPS</application> is
> > <ulink
>
> Add another newline after </para>.
>
> That's it, cheers.

Danke.  Committed.

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Wes Peters                                              wes@softweyr.com