Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2008 14:06:04 -0500 From: "Ben Kaduk" <minimarmot@gmail.com> To: "Christian Brueffer" <brueffer@freebsd.org> Cc: svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r185448 - head/share/man/man4 Message-ID: <47d0403c0811291106v702257f6pd5bdc8257a8bf311@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <200811291858.mATIwKej059716@svn.freebsd.org> References: <200811291858.mATIwKej059716@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Sat, Nov 29, 2008 at 1:58 PM, Christian Brueffer <brueffer@freebsd.org> wrote: > Author: brueffer > Date: Sat Nov 29 18:58:20 2008 > New Revision: 185448 > URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/185448 > > Log: > Bring this a little closer to our manpage style. > > Modified: > head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 > > Modified: head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 > ============================================================================== > --- head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 Sat Nov 29 18:21:31 2008 (r185447) > +++ head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 Sat Nov 29 18:58:20 2008 (r185448) > @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ > .\" OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF > .\" SUCH DAMAGE. > .\" > -.Dd $Mdocdate: April 17 2008 $ > +.Dd April 17, 2008 > .Os > .Dt UPGT 4 > .Sh NAME > @@ -140,29 +140,43 @@ driver can be configured at runtime with > .\"users have to download these files on their own. > This driver requires the > .Nm upgtfw > -be installed before it will work. > +firmware be installed before it will work. At the risk of being a pedant, I think the grammar is not quite correct, here -- either "This driver requires that the upgtfw firmware be installed before it will work", or (my preference) "This driver requires the upgtfw firmware to be installed before it will work." -Ben Kaduk
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