Date: Thu, 5 Oct 1995 14:06:27 -0700 (PDT) From: Jake Hamby <jehamby@lightside.com> To: Sean Kelly <kelly@fsl.noaa.gov> Cc: jfieber@indiana.edu, doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Kernelconfig.sgml FINALLY FINISHED! Message-ID: <Pine.BSF.3.91.951005140209.255A-100000@localhost> In-Reply-To: <9510052018.AA23469@emu.fsl.noaa.gov>
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On Thu, 5 Oct 1995, Sean Kelly wrote:
> Great document! And 34K is nothing to laugh at. That's hefty for our
> project. It's up there with the SCSI and porting documents. And a
> bit away from that mutant section on printing ... :-)
>
> Anyway, here's some proofing comments ... feel free to ignore all of
> these:
>
> [snip...]
>
> Best wishes!
>
> --
> Sean Kelly
> NOAA Forecast Systems Laboratory, Boulder Colorado USA
Thanks for the compliments! I'm going to look over your suggestions in a
little bit, and I noticed a couple of other changes I wanted to make.
Namely, John suggested that I mention the exact syntax of the line, i.e.
"controller le0 blah blah blah" instead of just "The le0 Controller"
which I had before. I think this makes it a bit easier to find the line
that's being discussed, so I'm going to apply that syntax throughout the
document (there are a few sections I accidentally missed). Finally, I'm
going to add a quick paragraph on the MFS filesystem which can be useful
as a RAM disk for /tmp for example. Again, thanks for the comments, and
I'll post to the list in a few hours after I've updated these last
corrections...
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Jake Hamby | E-Mail: jehamby@lightside.com
Student, Cal Poly University, Pomona | System Administrator, JPL
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