Date: Fri, 26 Sep 2008 11:44:17 +0000 (UTC) From: Gabor Pali <pgj@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/gjournal-desktop article.sgml Message-ID: <200809261144.m8QBiHtH092564@repoman.freebsd.org>
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pgj 2008-09-26 11:44:17 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/gjournal-desktop article.sgml
Log:
Update articles/gjournal-desktop to fix a few minor issues I found
during its translation recently:
- Fix capitalization issues in titles according to the Chicago Manual of Style
- Update Manolis' e-mail address to his FreeBSD.org one
- Correct some misspelled words, like "filesystem" or "soft updates" according
to the word list in FDP Primer [1]
- Add <replaceable> elements to minor versions in "FreeBSD 7.X"
- Replace bogus <filename role="device"> markups with <filename
class="devicefile"> elements
- Rewrite "NGb" constructs to "N GB"
- Rename sysinstall's disk label editor to <application>Disklabel</application>
partition editor, in reflect of the corresponding sections of the FreeBSD
Handbook [2]
- Replace <keycap>up</keycap> and <keycap>down</keycap> markups with a more
general form, similar to the Handbook [2]
- Mark up user commands with <userinput> inside <screen> elements
- Use <filename> and <devicename> where applicable
- Fix typos (like "ads1s1d")
- Mark up Enter key with <keycap>Enter</keycap>
- Mark up Ivan Voras (ivoras@) with his now-official Handbook entity
- Mark up usernames with <username>
[1] http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style-word-list.html
[2] http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/handbook/install-steps.html
Reviewed by: manolis, keramida
Approved by: gabor (mentor)
Revision Changes Path
1.3 +110 -110 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/gjournal-desktop/article.sgml
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