From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Thu Apr 20 10:43:10 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4079DD48BF3; Thu, 20 Apr 2017 10:43:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 02607FC7; Thu, 20 Apr 2017 10:43:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id v3KAh92F037646; Thu, 20 Apr 2017 10:43:09 GMT (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from remko@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id v3KAh9q1037645; Thu, 20 Apr 2017 10:43:09 GMT (envelope-from remko@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201704201043.v3KAh9q1037645@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: remko set sender to remko@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Remko Lodder Date: Thu, 20 Apr 2017 10:43:09 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r50186 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.23 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 20 Apr 2017 10:43:10 -0000 Author: remko Date: Thu Apr 20 10:43:08 2017 New Revision: 50186 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50186 Log: Use uppercase W at the beginning of a new sentence. Found while translating the document. Facilitated by: Snow B.V. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 20 04:06:34 2017 (r50185) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Thu Apr 20 10:43:08 2017 (r50186) @@ -1633,7 +1633,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID including stripe (not recommended, no redundancy), mirror (best performance, least usable space), and RAID-Z 1, 2, and 3 (with the capability to withstand the concurrent failure of 1, - 2, and 3 disks, respectively). while selecting the pool type, + 2, and 3 disks, respectively). While selecting the pool type, a tooltip is displayed across the bottom of the screen with advice about the number of required disks, and in the case of RAID-Z, the optimal number of disks for each