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Date:      Wed, 8 Feb 2006 03:56:14 GMT
From:      Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com>
To:        freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   docs/93014: minor nits in the project model book (dev-model)
Message-ID:  <200602080356.k183uEGA029926@www.freebsd.org>
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>Number:         93014
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       minor nits in the project model book (dev-model)
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Feb 08 04:00:19 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Ben Kaduk
>Release:        freebsd-current
>Organization:
University of Illinois
>Environment:
FreeBSD prolepsis.urh.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #20: Sun Jan 29 15:09:06 UTC 2006     kaduk@prolepsis.urh.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/PROLEPSIS  i386

>Description:
In the project model book, I found a few minor nits whilst perusing its contents.

One nit is the use of "to" instead of "too" on line 2209 of the source.


Another is in the picture describing "official hats," on line 861 of the source -- a reference is made to the XFree86 Project, Inc. Liason, but the FreeBSD project is currently using XOrg (to the best of my knowledge).
>How-To-Repeat:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/dev-model/process-release-engineering.html
(about halfway down the page)

http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/dev-model/official-hats.html
>Fix:
--- book.sgml   Wed Feb  8 02:38:24 2006
+++ book.sgml.orig      Wed Feb  8 02:38:08 2006
@@ -2206,7 +2206,7 @@
                     stability cannot be sacrificed by self-imposed deadlines and
                     target release dates.
 
-                    For slips of time not to become too long with regards to security
+                    For slips of time not to become to long with regards to security
                     and stability issues,
                     extra discipline is required when committing changes to -STABLE.
 


The original image would need to be modified for the XFree86/XOrg nit.
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:



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