From owner-svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.ORG Wed May 22 02:31:17 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 266DCCB4; Wed, 22 May 2013 02:31:17 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-7.mit.edu (DMZ-MAILSEC-SCANNER-7.MIT.EDU [18.7.68.36]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B08B3F15; Wed, 22 May 2013 02:31:16 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 12074424-b7f8c6d0000028c4-12-519c2cc01938 Received: from mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.35]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-7.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id 44.50.10436.0CC2C915; Tue, 21 May 2013 22:26:08 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (OUTGOING-AUTH-1.MIT.EDU [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id r4M2Q8cu009282; Tue, 21 May 2013 22:26:08 -0400 Received: from multics.mit.edu (SYSTEM-LOW-SIPB.MIT.EDU [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id r4M2Q65s013168 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 21 May 2013 22:26:07 -0400 Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id r4M2Q5Ao011273; Tue, 21 May 2013 22:26:05 -0400 (EDT) Date: Tue, 21 May 2013 22:26:05 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Tom Rhodes Subject: Re: svn commit: r41663 - projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports In-Reply-To: <20130521152427.25a28ecc.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> Message-ID: References: <201305181824.r4IIOBcm068566@svn.freebsd.org> <20130521152427.25a28ecc.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFnrHIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrHtAZ06gQe9GG4sfHw8xWSw8s5rZ 4u+GDywOzB4zPs1nCWCM4rJJSc3JLEst0rdL4Mo48q6btWAPa8WubosGxsUsXYycHBICJhIb J+xggrDFJC7cW8/WxcjFISSwj1Fi4eKPUM5GRonlHY+YIZxDTBKTj0+GyjQwSmxtuMgG0s8i oC2x/dQ6RhCbTUBFYuabjWBxESD77sHTYDuYBWwkJjxYwA5iCwukSGxpucoKYnMKWElsvfAM rIZXwEHi4KmpUNvmMEr8aHgMdqyogI7E6v1TWCCKBCVOznzCAjHUUuLcn+tsExgFZyFJzUKS WsDItIpRNiW3Sjc3MTOnODVZtzg5MS8vtUjXXC83s0QvNaV0EyMoWNldVHYwNh9SOsQowMGo xMP7oHZ2oBBrYllxZe4hRkkOJiVRXnPNOYFCfEn5KZUZicUZ8UWlOanFhxglOJiVRHhXqQHl eFMSK6tSi/JhUtIcLErivNdTbvoLCaQnlqRmp6YWpBbBZGU4OJQkeFdrAzUKFqWmp1akZeaU IKSZODhBhvMADT8CUsNbXJCYW5yZDpE/xagoJc67DCQhAJLIKM2D64Ulk1eM4kCvCPOuAKni ASYiuO5XQIOZgAZvt5wJMrgkESEl1cDo1bDq2570COMy7jbmBU9f3Re7e61llduFZBmva2uN eE59OxchF6JoJW6wUSrdX57LiyuleNncyKtHP/k5Wpitd62QXmw/22LzHr4psbc981eH+vRt cTxnazazdXNiVZKt1/7C6Xd4ntytr1m9JOWJzaJJmluzVf9rz9jacHTBx6UvdiatnWqgxFKc kWioxVxUnAgAPvNnOwEDAAA= Cc: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for doc projects trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 22 May 2013 02:31:17 -0000 On Tue, 21 May 2013, Tom Rhodes wrote: > On Sun, 19 May 2013 23:38:06 -0400 (EDT) > Benjamin Kaduk wrote: >> >> The comma usage here seems broken, as "a forum" is an alternative to "a >> web site", and the only things bound to "a web site" are now "additional >> documentation, frequently asked quesions", which should take "and" with no >> comma and does not need to be followed by a comma. > > I kind of disagree - forums can be separate or part of a main > site. It really depends and I'm not going to debate how to word > it out proper - I've just removed forum. Cheers, Wow, I missed that reading entirely, and it's perfectly valid. Sorry about that. -Ben