From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Dec 1 21:37:13 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3DF7F16A4F3 for ; Mon, 1 Dec 2003 21:37:13 -0800 (PST) Received: from ms-dienst.rz.rwth-aachen.de (ms-2.rz.RWTH-Aachen.DE [134.130.3.131]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9135443FA3 for ; Mon, 1 Dec 2003 21:37:11 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from chris@unixpages.org) Received: from r220-1 (r220-1.rz.RWTH-Aachen.DE [134.130.3.31]) by ms-dienst.rz.rwth-aachen.de (iPlanet Messaging Server 5.2 HotFix 1.12 (built Feb 13 2003)) with ESMTP id <0HP900MR469YEA@ms-dienst.rz.rwth-aachen.de> for FreeBSD-doc@freebsd.org; Tue, 02 Dec 2003 06:37:10 +0100 (MET) Received: from relay.RWTH-Aachen.DE ([134.130.3.1]) by r220-1 (MailMonitor for SMTP v1.2.2 ) ; Tue, 02 Dec 2003 06:37:09 +0100 (MET) Received: from haakonia.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de (postfix@haakonia.hitnet.RWTH-Aachen.DE [137.226.181.92]) hB25b9sU000797; Tue, 02 Dec 2003 06:37:09 +0100 (MET) Received: from gondor.middleearth (gondor.middleearth [192.168.1.42]) (using TLSv1 with cipher EDH-RSA-DES-CBC3-SHA (168/168 bits)) (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4B2AE29; Tue, 02 Dec 2003 06:37:09 +0100 (CET) Received: by gondor.middleearth (Postfix, from userid 1001) id A2C0B461C; Tue, 02 Dec 2003 06:37:08 +0100 (CET) Date: Tue, 02 Dec 2003 06:37:08 +0100 From: Christian Brueffer In-reply-to: <20031201221825.GB10158@jenny.daemon.li> To: Josef El-Rayes Message-id: <20031202053708.GC71732@unixpages.org> MIME-version: 1.0 Content-type: multipart/signed; boundary="GPJrCs/72TxItFYR"; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha1 Content-disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.4.1i X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT X-PGP-Key: http://people.freebsd.org/~brueffer/brueffer.key.asc X-PGP-Fingerprint: A5C8 2099 19FF AACA F41B B29B 6C76 178C A0ED 982D References: <3FCBB04F.7070204@potentialtech.com> <20031201221825.GB10158@jenny.daemon.li> cc: FreeBSD-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Proposed addition to the mail section of the handbook X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 02 Dec 2003 05:37:13 -0000 --GPJrCs/72TxItFYR Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Mon, Dec 01, 2003 at 11:18:25PM +0100, Josef El-Rayes wrote: > Bill Moran wrote: > > In all seriousness, I'm not totally confident with docbook=20 > > yet, so suggestions > > on all levels are appreciated. (at least I got make to=20 > > stop complaining ;) >=20 > hy, i had a look at your patch and i have following suggestions: >=20 > line 27: &man.send-pr.1; which creates a link to the > send-pr manualpage. >=20 > line 45: the dot should not be inside the apostrophes. >=20 > line 48: Execute the following commands as root. <- shouldn't > this end with ':' instead of '.'? >=20 > line 47+48: mark ssmtp port up with > mail/ssmtp >=20 > line 51: i think it is common practice in the handbook > to propose "make install clean" for installations. >=20 > line 53: i would markup ssmtp with application tag >=20 > line 26+32: why is there a different identing? as far > as i can see, both lines are on same level. >=20 > line 56-60: what about indenting here? >=20 > line 71: s/ssmpt/ssmtp >=20 > line 72: it is "manpage" not "man page". >=20 Actually it is 'manual page'. - Christian --=20 Christian Brueffer chris@unixpages.org brueffer@FreeBSD.org GPG Key: http://people.freebsd.org/~brueffer/brueffer.key.asc GPG Fingerprint: A5C8 2099 19FF AACA F41B B29B 6C76 178C A0ED 982D --GPJrCs/72TxItFYR Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.2 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE/zCUDbHYXjKDtmC0RAt5LAKDlYJuMHgbBOZT4+l4K+XXU7XFgygCcCZWg SnGdK0FseZa0ZJy4dTkQd2A= =Ut6n -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --GPJrCs/72TxItFYR--