From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Mar 15 00:39:19 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5110C589 for ; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 00:39:19 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-wg0-f48.google.com (mail-wg0-f48.google.com [74.125.82.48]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D2378684 for ; Fri, 15 Mar 2013 00:39:18 +0000 (UTC) Received: by mail-wg0-f48.google.com with SMTP id 16so2538228wgi.3 for ; Thu, 14 Mar 2013 17:39:12 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=x-received:mime-version:from:date:message-id:subject:to :content-type; bh=gBv5YuAUldSIlnYMchqqACJyBORBHr7TI8TZ2spnW+Y=; b=OHQkZmq3aCT/XYYH3JasPAx3LRTQHx/uMA5nTmf4MGMf3FoJcaMgSyqNf13zceVVTp 5JdQoRh2iqTkSjxGNfqr4AhaKPx4w2u1s5Rb0u0T0NHYRe/SKeMrfVBHbr7Rldwjyls9 /4Z/ezwHA6FISL5TJlGILMlQouv+ptGkdDvsM= X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=20120113; h=x-received:mime-version:from:date:message-id:subject:to :content-type:x-gm-message-state; bh=gBv5YuAUldSIlnYMchqqACJyBORBHr7TI8TZ2spnW+Y=; b=ddGH7l6gDq3ge2sWH++uOKaT3Jt1clh+Hhf7ujGAYGEZAV9Rqr8fVOpAJoyJtaqWAn YscpRZPmaugW3NwQTqZykTeqi8GcweLyAqPaLrcKkad6zM30qQ0GtodMyL4crmC5/O3e lYqsKIqiu9moaHBvmLY7gEbhj3UFUYma5GyGu/AQchvGOr5SFSntWmx3Yjk1QG0eo/ij rY06Nu3olHe6SDahAhKW5BXeHGRieSGC4kq8336Aq9xtmSVaIpHYkEknZuMO+O8WhI3a MIjO04cHef5B+w4bhnHAHKljkXBiWpurLbFf+vRiyS1mKBe6f+lQHvqTlpyinyc1TQrJ hTaA== X-Received: by 10.194.122.131 with SMTP id ls3mr7621634wjb.55.1363307952097; Thu, 14 Mar 2013 17:39:12 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.194.108.106 with HTTP; Thu, 14 Mar 2013 17:38:42 -0700 (PDT) From: Eitan Adler Date: Thu, 14 Mar 2013 20:38:42 -0400 Message-ID: Subject: FAQ Introduction and Abstract To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQnE53C2Y6hmvcKBaHEdpIU5CcQ1Qlispiu4Bt3cQYyOrM3XpnvrfVbtzS2jOGoruvX3UF2r X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 15 Mar 2013 00:39:19 -0000 Anyone have thoughts on the following? commit 77849693306b6dc0698ac45a4173d43f419e97e9 Author: Eitan Adler Date: Thu Mar 14 20:37:13 2013 -0400 Remove duplicate text from the introduction and move it into the abstract. Simplify some of the text from both sections. Reviewed by: doc Approved by: ??? (mentor) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml index 8c93f05..df5fa00 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml @@ -73,39 +73,26 @@ $FreeBSD$ - This is the FAQ for &os; versions - &rel2.relx; and &rel.relx;. - If you are interested in helping with - this project, send email to the &a.doc;. The latest version of + This is the FAQ for &os; versions &rel2.relx; and + &rel.relx;. Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as + informative as possible; if you have any suggestions as to how + it may be improved, please feel free to mail them to the + &a.doc;. + + The latest version of this document is always available from the &os; website. It may also be downloaded as one large HTML file with HTTP or as a variety of other formats from the &os; FTP - server. You may also want to Search the FAQ. + server. Introduction - Welcome to the &os; - &rel2.relx; - and &rel.relx; - - FAQ! - - As is usual with Usenet FAQs, this document aims to cover the - most frequently asked questions concerning the &os; operating - system (and of course answer them!). Although originally intended - to reduce bandwidth and avoid the same old questions being asked - over and over again, FAQs have become recognized as valuable - information resources. - - Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as informative as - possible; if you have any suggestions as to how it may be - improved, please feel free to mail them to the &a.doc;. - -- Eitan Adler