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Subject: svn commit: r52009 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction
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Author: trasz (src,ports committer)
Date: Mon Jul 16 11:19:12 2018
New Revision: 52009
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52009

Log:
  Move the link to Wikipedia to a better place, use https://, and rephrase a bit.
  
  Reviewed by:	allanjude@ (earlier version)
  Approved by:	allanjude@ (earlier version)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D16280

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Mon Jul 16 06:50:47 2018	(r52008)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml	Mon Jul 16 11:19:12 2018	(r52009)
@@ -709,6 +709,10 @@
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
+      <para>Wikipedia also maintains a <link
+	  xlink:href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_products_based_on_FreeBSD">list
+	  of products based on &os;</link>.</para>
+
       <para>&os; is also used to power some of the biggest sites on
 	the Internet, including:</para>
 
@@ -775,9 +779,6 @@
 
       </itemizedlist>
 
-      <para>and many more.  Wikipedia also maintains a <link
-	  xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_products_based_on_FreeBSD">list
-	  of products based on &os;</link>.</para>
     </sect2>
   </sect1>