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jim         2001/08/04 12:32:10 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook book.sgml 
  Log:
  Add periods to the ends of the sentences in the list in the
  introduction.  While I'm at it, change "dipped in to" to "read" in the
  system administration intro.  Also reword the first sentence to read a
  little better.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.110     +8 -8      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml


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