From owner-svn-src-all@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Apr 2 13:51:07 2015 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4AF903DA; Thu, 2 Apr 2015 13:51:07 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 1D48E7B7; Thu, 2 Apr 2015 13:51:07 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9) with ESMTP id t32Dp6Kf080887; Thu, 2 Apr 2015 13:51:06 GMT (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9/Submit) id t32Dp6vR080886; Thu, 2 Apr 2015 13:51:06 GMT (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201504021351.t32Dp6vR080886@svn.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: svn.freebsd.org: wblock set sender to wblock@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Warren Block Date: Thu, 2 Apr 2015 13:51:06 +0000 (UTC) To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r280988 - head/sbin/ggate/ggatec X-SVN-Group: head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18-1 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 02 Apr 2015 13:51:07 -0000 Author: wblock (doc committer) Date: Thu Apr 2 13:51:06 2015 New Revision: 280988 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/280988 Log: Add articles, avoid use of "you", simplify a few sentences. MFC after: 1 week Modified: head/sbin/ggate/ggatec/ggatec.8 Modified: head/sbin/ggate/ggatec/ggatec.8 ============================================================================== --- head/sbin/ggate/ggatec/ggatec.8 Thu Apr 2 13:02:25 2015 (r280987) +++ head/sbin/ggate/ggatec/ggatec.8 Thu Apr 2 13:51:06 2015 (r280988) @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ .\" .\" $FreeBSD$ .\" -.Dd April 26, 2004 +.Dd April 2, 2015 .Dt GGATEC 8 .Os .Sh NAME @@ -67,29 +67,29 @@ .Sh DESCRIPTION The .Nm -utility is a network client for GEOM Gate class. -It is responsible for creation of +utility is a network client for the GEOM Gate class. +It is responsible for the creation of .Nm ggate -devices and forwarding I/O requests between +devices and forwarding I/O requests between the .Nm geom_gate.ko -kernel module and +kernel module and the .Xr ggated 8 network daemon. Available commands: .Bl -tag -width ".Cm destroy" .It Cm create -Connect to given +Connect to a .Xr ggated 8 -daemon and create a +daemon on the specified host and create a .Nm ggate -provider related to the given remote file or device. +provider for the specified remote file or device. .It Cm rescue -If +Create a new connection after the .Nm -process died/has been killed, you can save situation with this -command, which creates new connection to the +process has died or been killed. +The new connection to the .Xr ggated 8 -daemon and will handle pending and future requests. +daemon handles pending and future requests. .It Cm destroy Destroy the given .Nm ggate @@ -139,12 +139,11 @@ provider. If not specified, it is taken from device, or set to 512 bytes for files. .It Fl t Ar timeout Number of seconds to wait before an I/O request will be canceled. -0 means no timeout. -Default is 0. +Default is 0, which means no timeout. .It Fl u Ar unit Unit number to use. .It Fl v -Do not fork, run in foreground and print debug informations on standard +Do not fork, run in foreground and print debug information on standard output. .It Ar host Remote host to connect to. @@ -159,7 +158,7 @@ should be called with the .Fl v option. .Sh EXAMPLES -Make use of CD-ROM device from remote host. +Use a CD-ROM device on a remote host. .Bd -literal -offset indent server# cat /etc/gg.exports client RO /dev/acd0