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From: Chris Hill <chris@monochrome.org>
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Subject: Re: Typo in asmctl(1)
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On Mon, 19 Apr 2021, Joe Smith wrote:

> In
> https://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=asmctl&sektion=1&apropos=0&manpath=FreeBSD+12.2-RELEASE+and+Ports
> it says
>
> *video* *down*
> 	     LCD backlight less	dark.
>
> That should be either "LCD backlight less bright" or "LCD backlight darken".

Of those two phrases, the former reads better IMHO. And as long as we're 
looking at this, I imagine "key down" needs the same change. And 
REQUIERMENT should be REQUIREMENTS. And the line after, which begins 
with "following," could benefit from an initial "the."


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Chris Hill               chris@monochrome.org