Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2008 19:10:07 +0200 From: "Rene Ladan" <r.c.ladan@gmail.com> To: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Fwd: PERFORCE change 151420 for review Message-ID: <e890cae60810151010j46166fcaxa36ede294447ee21@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <200810151707.m9FH7xVL058373@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <200810151707.m9FH7xVL058373@repoman.freebsd.org>
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Hi, here are some proposed changes to the Updating chapter of the Handbook. Regards, Rene ---------- Doorgestuurd bericht ---------- Van: Rene Ladan <rene@freebsd.org> Datum: 15 oktober 2008 19:07 Onderwerp: PERFORCE change 151420 for review Aan: Perforce Change Reviews <perforce@freebsd.org> http://perforce.freebsd.org/chv.cgi?CH=151420 Change 151420 by rene@rene_self on 2008/10/15 17:07:42 Complete the translation of the Updating chapter (spelling/language). Fix some minor nits in the English version. Checked build. Affected files ... .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating/chapter.sgml#2 edit .. //depot/projects/docproj_nl/nl_NL.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating/chapter.sgml#6 edit Differences ... ==== //depot/projects/docproj_nl/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating/chapter.sgml#2 (text+ko) ==== @@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ &prompt.root; <userinput>rm /var/db/pkg/pkgdb.db /usr/ports/INDEX-*.db</userinput> &prompt.root; <userinput>portupgrade -af</userinput></screen> - <para>This has completed, finish the upgrade process with a + <para>Once this has completed, finish the upgrade process with a final call to <command>freebsd-update</command>. Issue the following command to tie up all loose ends in the upgrade process:</para> @@ -440,14 +440,14 @@ <varname>kern.securelevel</varname> setting and storing the <command>freebsd-update</command> data on a read only file system when not in use, a better solution would be to - compare the system against a secure disk. Such as a + compare the system against a secure disk, such as a <acronym>DVD</acronym> or securely stored external <acronym>USB</acronym> disk device.</para> </warning> <para>The system will now be inspected, and a list of files - along with their &man.sha256.1; hash values, both known values - in the release and the current installed value. This is why + along with their &man.sha256.1; hash values, both the known value + in the release and the current installed value, will be printed. This is why the output has been sent to the <filename>outfile.ids</filename> file. It scrolls by too quickly for eye comparisons, and soon it fills up the console @@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ all files different from those in the release, issue the following command:</para> - <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cat update.ids | awk '{ print $1 }' | more</userinput> + <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cat outfile.ids | awk '{ print $1 }' | more</userinput> /etc/master.passwd /etc/motd /etc/passwd @@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ <para>The base system of &os; includes a utility for updating the Ports Collection too: the &man.portsnap.8; utility. Upon execution, it will connect to a remote site, verify the secure - key, and download a new copy of the ports collection. The key + key, and download a new copy of the Ports Collection. The key is used to verify the integrity of all downloaded files, ensuring they have not been modified in-flight. To download the latest Ports Collection files, issue the following command:</para> [... cut Dutch version ...] -- http://www.rene-ladan.nl/ GPG fingerprint = E738 5471 D185 7013 0EE0 4FC8 3C1D 6F83 12E1 84F6 (subkeys.pgp.net)
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