From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Tue Jun 19 14:48:32 2018 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 179C0101EC8E; Tue, 19 Jun 2018 14:48:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-4.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-4.mit.edu [18.9.25.15]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 92303849ED; Tue, 19 Jun 2018 14:48:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) X-AuditID: 1209190f-2a5ff700000025be-b5-5b29168688e0 Received: from mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.35]) (using TLS with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-4.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id D9.51.09662.686192B5; Tue, 19 Jun 2018 10:43:19 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (OUTGOING-AUTH-1.MIT.EDU [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-1.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id w5JEhHdw028273; Tue, 19 Jun 2018 10:43:17 -0400 Received: from kduck.kaduk.org (24-107-191-124.dhcp.stls.mo.charter.com [24.107.191.124]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id w5JEhC4h025395 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 19 Jun 2018 10:43:15 -0400 Date: Tue, 19 Jun 2018 09:43:12 -0500 From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Eitan Adler Cc: Warren Block , doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r51840 - head/share/xml Message-ID: <20180619144312.GC4946@kduck.kaduk.org> References: <201806160419.w5G4JjoC080725@repo.freebsd.org> <20180616171239.GV64971@kduck.kaduk.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: User-Agent: Mutt/1.9.1 (2017-09-22) X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrJIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrNsuphltcOk9l8WPj4eYLHb9ncNs cWPRfiaL3f29zBa/Tnk4sHrM+DSfxeNIxyPGAKYoLpuU1JzMstQifbsEroz9xw+wFdxnqdj6 ax1LA+ND5i5GTg4JAROJO/fnsXUxcnEICSxmkph86wYLSEJIYCOjxN49KRCJq0wSH181soEk WARUJf6tXcEIYrMJqEg0dF8GmyQCZH/f/5MJxGYWqJWYNGcyWI2wgIHEmS8f2UFsXgFjic7v /9khhj5hlGi7NocJIiEocXLmExaIZi2JG/9eAsU5gGxpieX/OEDCnAKBEm8+ngUrFxVQltjb d4h9AqPALCTds5B0z0LoXsDIvIpRNiW3Sjc3MTOnODVZtzg5MS8vtUjXRC83s0QvNaV0EyM4 hCX5dzDOafA+xCjAwajEw8vArBktxJpYVlyZe4hRkoNJSZT35Q6NaCG+pPyUyozE4oz4otKc 1OJDjBIczEoivAyngHK8KYmVValF+TApaQ4WJXHe7EWM0UIC6YklqdmpqQWpRTBZGQ4OJQne SlGgPYJFqempFWmZOSUIaSYOTpDhPEDDN4DU8BYXJOYWZ6ZD5E8xKkqJ8+4DSQiAJDJK8+B6 QSlGInt/zStGcaBXhHm5gQlHiAeYnuC6XwENZgIavKVKHWRwSSJCSqqBUb48cmbI4k3eMd/e zUmcy7s1Rd/z219t5veiFtMjNd+7P1nFI9U686Ftx9MVZ3ZumDt5xsMzc8Xqhe/9iIvbtUrL 8kmei1tU/triup0RDl/mpvBMVLgglxIrsklor26OxJl1jn4cfhx2Ew7+PuTQ31Rw+dsMtnBH r85tH1e8NcuIvbOtdtuME0osxRmJhlrMRcWJAMRw2FIMAwAA X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.26 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 19 Jun 2018 14:48:32 -0000 On Mon, Jun 18, 2018 at 10:40:28PM -0700, Eitan Adler wrote: > On 18 June 2018 at 04:57, Warren Block wrote: > > On Sat, 16 Jun 2018, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > > > >> Hmm, do I misremmber, or do we generally prefer writing out > >> "Subversion" to the acronym "SVN"? > > > > > > Spelled out is better, we shouldn't assume the reader knows what "SVN" > > means. > > Done - and in a few more places too. Thanks! (A bit of searching reveals that I was probably thinking about https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style-word-list.html , FWIW.) -Ben