Date: Sat, 21 Jun 2008 12:52:08 +0200 From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org> To: Gabor PALI <pgj@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml Message-ID: <20080621105208.GB1058@gothic.blackend.org> In-Reply-To: <485CDAEE.8020200@FreeBSD.org> References: <200806210831.m5L8VgsG091493@repoman.freebsd.org> <20080621100650.GA1058@gothic.blackend.org> <485CDAEE.8020200@FreeBSD.org>
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On Sat, Jun 21, 2008 at 12:41:50PM +0200, Gabor PALI wrote: > Marc Fonvieille wrote: > > This should be avoided; in our docset (e.g., mail chapter in the > > Handbook) "sendmail" is used not "Sendmail. We don't change the case of > > a command/daemon/application cause of the beginning of a sentence, if we > > have to start a sentence we use "The Nm. utility" scheme. This helps > > consistency and prevents confusions when it comes to type a command. > > Thank you for your comment. Would you approve my fix? (See [1]) > > > :g > > [1] > http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/for_review/2008-06-21/books.faq.patch.193.diff > I'd add some words, see below: Index: book.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.1003 diff -u -r1.1003 book.sgml --- book.sgml 21 Jun 2008 08:36:19 -0000 1.1003 +++ book.sgml 21 Jun 2008 10:39:43 -0000 @@ -3370,7 +3370,7 @@ <qandaentry> <question id="mail-loopback"> - <para>Why does Sendmail give me an error reading + <para>Why does <application>sendmail</application> give me an error reading <errorname>mail loops back to myself</errorname>?</para> </question> @@ -6020,7 +6020,7 @@ </question> <answer> - <para><ulink url="http://www.sendmail.org/"><application>Sendmail</application></ulink>; is + <para>The <ulink url="http://www.sendmail.org/"><application>sendmail</application></ulink>; is ^ |_ server the default mail-server software for FreeBSD, but you can easily replace it with one of the other MTA (for instance, an MTA installed from the ports).</para> @@ -8197,7 +8197,7 @@ <qandaentry> <question id="sendmail-port-587"> - <para><application>Sendmail</application> is listening on port 587 as well as the + <para>The <application>sendmail</application> is listening on port 587 as well as the ^ |_ daemon standard port 25! What is going on?</para> </question> -- Marc
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