Date: Sat, 08 Dec 2012 23:27:59 +0100 From: Guido Falsi <madpilot@FreeBSD.org> To: Eitan Adler <lists@eitanadler.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, bapt@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Patch for porter's handbook Message-ID: <50C3BEEF.5070809@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <CAF6rxg=V9RHeeY=e39xaJDzKFw6a_k%2BbqVR7k%2B942O5q1PfhYw@mail.gmail.com> References: <50C3AEE6.3020101@FreeBSD.org> <CAF6rxgkDTMgsNuu8%2BtpahmAXeHHVftxPQ6AeSR2pcrr3_YNawg@mail.gmail.com> <50C3B788.6050809@FreeBSD.org> <CAF6rxg=V9RHeeY=e39xaJDzKFw6a_k%2BbqVR7k%2B942O5q1PfhYw@mail.gmail.com>
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This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------030409050502040805080505 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit On 12/08/12 23:04, Eitan Adler wrote: > On 8 December 2012 16:56, Guido Falsi <madpilot@freebsd.org> wrote: >> On 12/08/12 22:22, Eitan Adler wrote: >>> >>> On 8 December 2012 16:19, Guido Falsi <madpilot@freebsd.org> wrote: >>>> >>>> Hi! >>>> Some time ago the maintainer of net-mgmt/mrtg noticed that the porter's >>>> handbook still reference NOPORTDOCS in place of the new DOCS option in >>>> optionsng. >>>> >>>> I have a patch(attached) which fixes this. bapt has already seen it and >>>> approved it, as suggested by him I added a tag around "DOCS". >>>> >>>> I'd like this patch to be revised by someone of the documentation team >>>> and >>>> approved for committing it. I'm obviously accepting any comment or >>>> correction. >>> >>> >>> The content changes look good. However, please don't make whitespace / >>> formatting changes in the same patch as this makes it harder to figure >>> out what changed for both the reviewers and translators. >>> >> >> Good point. Here is a revised patch with only the content changes included. > > Looks good to me. > > Not your text but: > > "and neither would be added to port packing list" doesn't sound quite > right. Try replacing "and neither would be" with "or". > Done. final patch for approval attached. -- Guido Falsi <madpilot@FreeBSD.org> --------------030409050502040805080505 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii; name="porthand.diff" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="porthand.diff" SW5kZXg6IGVuX1VTLklTTzg4NTktMS9ib29rcy9wb3J0ZXJzLWhhbmRib29rL2Jvb2sueG1s Cj09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09PT09 PT09PT09PT09PT09PT0KLS0tIGVuX1VTLklTTzg4NTktMS9ib29rcy9wb3J0ZXJzLWhhbmRi b29rL2Jvb2sueG1sCShyZXZpc2lvbiA0MDMwNykKKysrIGVuX1VTLklTTzg4NTktMS9ib29r cy9wb3J0ZXJzLWhhbmRib29rL2Jvb2sueG1sCSh3b3JraW5nIGNvcHkpCkBAIC00OTIyLDEx ICs0OTIyLDExIEBACiAJICA8bWFrZXZhcj5QS0dOQU1FPC9tYWtldmFyPi48L3BhcmE+CiAK IAk8cGFyYT5NYWtlIHRoZSBpbnN0YWxsYXRpb24gZGVwZW5kZW50IG9uIHRoZSB2YXJpYWJs ZQotCSAgPG1ha2V2YXI+Tk9QT1JURE9DUzwvbWFrZXZhcj4gc28gdGhhdCB1c2VycyBjYW4g ZGlzYWJsZSBpdAorCSAgPGxpdGVyYWw+RE9DUzwvbGl0ZXJhbD4gb3B0aW9uIHNvIHRoYXQg dXNlcnMgY2FuIGRpc2FibGUgaXQKIAkgIGluIDxmaWxlbmFtZT4vZXRjL21ha2UuY29uZjwv ZmlsZW5hbWU+LCBsaWtlIHRoaXM6PC9wYXJhPgogCiAJPHByb2dyYW1saXN0aW5nPnBvc3Qt aW5zdGFsbDoKLS5pZiAhZGVmaW5lZChOT1BPUlRET0NTKQorLmlmICR7UE9SVF9PUFRJT05T Ok1ET0NTfQogCSR7TUtESVJ9ICR7RE9DU0RJUn0KIAkke0lOU1RBTExfTUFOfSAke1dSS1NS Q30vZG9jcy94dmRvY3MucHMgJHtET0NTRElSfQogLmVuZGlmPC9wcm9ncmFtbGlzdGluZz4K QEAgLTQ5NjgsMTMgKzQ5NjgsMTMgQEAKIAk8L2l0ZW1pemVkbGlzdD4KIAogCTxub3RlPgot CSAgPHBhcmE+PG1ha2V2YXI+Tk9QT1JURE9DUzwvbWFrZXZhcj4gb25seSBjb250cm9scyBh ZGRpdGlvbmFsCisJICA8cGFyYT5UaGUgPGxpdGVyYWw+RE9DUzwvbGl0ZXJhbD4gb3B0aW9u IG9ubHkgY29udHJvbHMgYWRkaXRpb25hbAogCSAgICBkb2N1bWVudGF0aW9uIGluc3RhbGxl ZCBpbiA8bWFrZXZhcj5ET0NTRElSPC9tYWtldmFyPi4gIEl0CiAJICAgIGRvZXMgbm90IGFw cGx5IHRvIHN0YW5kYXJkIG1hbiBwYWdlcyBhbmQgaW5mbyBwYWdlcy4KIAkgICAgVGhpbmdz IGluc3RhbGxlZCBpbiA8bWFrZXZhcj5EQVRBRElSPC9tYWtldmFyPiBhbmQKIAkgICAgPG1h a2V2YXI+RVhBTVBMRVNESVI8L21ha2V2YXI+IGFyZSBjb250cm9sbGVkIGJ5Ci0JICAgIDxt YWtldmFyPk5PUE9SVERBVEE8L21ha2V2YXI+IGFuZAotCSAgICA8bWFrZXZhcj5OT1BPUlRF WEFNUExFUzwvbWFrZXZhcj4sIHJlc3BlY3RpdmVseS48L3BhcmE+CisJICAgIDxsaXRlcmFs PkRBVEE8L2xpdGVyYWw+IGFuZAorCSAgICA8bGl0ZXJhbD5FWEFNUExFUzwvbGl0ZXJhbD4g b3B0aW9ucywgcmVzcGVjdGl2ZWx5LjwvcGFyYT4KIAk8L25vdGU+CiAKIAk8cGFyYT5UaGVz ZSB2YXJpYWJsZXMgYXJlIGV4cG9ydGVkIHRvCkBAIC01MDA4LDEwICs1MDA4LDEwIEBACiAJ ICBpcyBsaXN0ZWQgaW4gPG1ha2V2YXI+UE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IG9yIG1hdGNoZWQg YnkgYQogCSAgZ2xvYiBwYXR0ZXJuIGZyb20gdGhpcyB2YXJpYWJsZSwgdGhlIGVudGlyZSBz dWJ0cmVlIG9mCiAJICBjb250YWluZWQgZmlsZXMgYW5kIGRpcmVjdG9yaWVzIHdpbGwgYmUg cmVnaXN0ZXJlZCBpbiB0aGUKLQkgIGZpbmFsIHBhY2tpbmcgbGlzdC4gIElmIDxtYWtldmFy Pk5PUE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IGlzCi0JICBkZWZpbmVkIHRoZW4gZmlsZXMgYW5kIGRp cmVjdG9yaWVzIGxpc3RlZCBpbgotCSAgPG1ha2V2YXI+UE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IHdv dWxkIG5vdCBiZSBpbnN0YWxsZWQgYW5kCi0JICBuZWl0aGVyIHdvdWxkIGJlIGFkZGVkIHRv IHBvcnQgcGFja2luZyBsaXN0LiAgSW5zdGFsbGluZyB0aGUKKwkgIGZpbmFsIHBhY2tpbmcg bGlzdC4gIElmIHRoZSA8bGl0ZXJhbD5ET0NTPC9saXRlcmFsPiBvcHRpb24gaGFzCisJICBi ZWVuIHVuc2V0IHRoZW4gZmlsZXMgYW5kIGRpcmVjdG9yaWVzIGxpc3RlZCBpbgorCSAgPG1h a2V2YXI+UE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IHdvdWxkIG5vdCBiZSBpbnN0YWxsZWQKKwkgIG9y IGFkZGVkIHRvIHBvcnQgcGFja2luZyBsaXN0LiAgSW5zdGFsbGluZyB0aGUKIAkgIGRvY3Vt ZW50YXRpb24gYXQgPG1ha2V2YXI+UE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IGFzIHNob3duIGFib3Zl CiAJICByZW1haW5zIHVwIHRvIHRoZSBwb3J0IGl0c2VsZi4gIEEgdHlwaWNhbCBleGFtcGxl IG9mCiAJICB1dGlsaXppbmcgPG1ha2V2YXI+UE9SVERPQ1M8L21ha2V2YXI+IGxvb2tzIGFz Cg== --------------030409050502040805080505--
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