From owner-freebsd-questions@freebsd.org Tue Apr 20 18:31:47 2021 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-questions@mailman.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B6AB25E2C77 for ; Tue, 20 Apr 2021 18:31:47 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from daniel@dstev.net) Received: from mail-40136.protonmail.ch (mail-40136.protonmail.ch [185.70.40.136]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "protonmail.com", Issuer "SwissSign Server Gold CA 2014 - G22" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4FPshz02Jfz3L8K for ; Tue, 20 Apr 2021 18:31:46 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from daniel@dstev.net) Date: Tue, 20 Apr 2021 18:31:28 +0000 To: Chris Hill From: Daniel Stevenson Cc: Joe Smith , freebsd-questions@freebsd.org Reply-To: Daniel Stevenson Subject: Re: Typo in asmctl(1) Message-ID: In-Reply-To: References: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.0 required=10.0 tests=ALL_TRUSTED shortcircuit=no autolearn=disabled version=3.4.4 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.4 (2020-01-24) on mailout.protonmail.ch X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 4FPshz02Jfz3L8K X-Spamd-Bar: --- Authentication-Results: mx1.freebsd.org; dkim=none; dmarc=pass (policy=none) header.from=dstev.net; spf=pass (mx1.freebsd.org: domain of daniel@dstev.net designates 185.70.40.136 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=daniel@dstev.net X-Spamd-Result: default: False [-3.90 / 15.00]; HAS_REPLYTO(0.00)[daniel@dstev.net]; RWL_MAILSPIKE_VERYGOOD(0.00)[185.70.40.136:from]; REPLYTO_EQ_FROM(0.00)[]; FROM_HAS_DN(0.00)[]; RCPT_COUNT_THREE(0.00)[3]; TO_DN_SOME(0.00)[]; MID_RHS_MATCH_FROM(0.00)[]; MIME_GOOD(-0.10)[text/plain]; R_SPF_ALLOW(-0.20)[+ip4:185.70.40.0/24]; ARC_NA(0.00)[]; NEURAL_HAM_LONG(-1.00)[-1.000]; TO_MATCH_ENVRCPT_SOME(0.00)[]; NEURAL_HAM_SHORT(-1.00)[-1.000]; DMARC_POLICY_ALLOW(-0.50)[dstev.net,none]; NEURAL_HAM_MEDIUM(-1.00)[-1.000]; RCVD_COUNT_ZERO(0.00)[0]; FROM_EQ_ENVFROM(0.00)[]; R_DKIM_NA(0.00)[]; MIME_TRACE(0.00)[0:+]; ASN(0.00)[asn:62371, ipnet:185.70.40.0/24, country:CH]; FREEMAIL_CC(0.00)[gmail.com,freebsd.org]; MAILMAN_DEST(0.00)[freebsd-questions]; RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW(-0.10)[185.70.40.136:from] X-BeenThere: freebsd-questions@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.34 Precedence: list List-Id: User questions List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 20 Apr 2021 18:31:47 -0000 On Tuesday, April 20th, 2021 at 11:12, Chris Hill wr= ote: > On Mon, 19 Apr 2021, Joe Smith wrote: > > In > > https://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=3Dasmctl&sektion=3D1&apropos= =3D0&manpath=3DFreeBSD+12.2-RELEASE+and+Ports > > it says > > > > *video* *down* > > LCD backlight less dark. > > > > That should be either "LCD backlight less bright" or "LCD backlight dar= ken". > > Of those two phrases, the former reads better IMHO. And as long as we're > looking at this, I imagine "key down" needs the same change. And > REQUIERMENT should be REQUIREMENTS. And the line after, which begins > with "following," could benefit from an initial "the." I've submitted a pull request upstream with some suggested changes. https://github.com/yuichiro-naito/asmctl/pull/13 -- Daniel Stevenson