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From: Jim Mock <jim@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Mon, 22 May 2000 16:25:07 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: cvs commit: www/en applications.sgml
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jim         2000/05/22 16:25:07 PDT

  Modified files:
    en                   applications.sgml 
  Log:
  From the PR:
  
      o Changed "the kernel plus source code..." to "the kernel and..."
      o Made the three red sections parallel (sort of).
      o Zapped a superfluous "to".
      o Finally, fixed an effect/affect goof -- you'll find that the
        previous verbiage mistakenly refers to Microsoft's marketing
        strategy and not to FreeBSD's developers
  
  PR:		18630
  Submitted by:	Daniel Harris <dannyboy@subdimension.com>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.17      +6 -6      www/en/applications.sgml



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