Date: Mon, 28 Oct 2002 04:37:56 -0800 (PST) From: Dag-Erling Smorgrav <des@FreeBSD.org> To: Perforce Change Reviews <perforce@freebsd.org> Subject: PERFORCE change 20283 for review Message-ID: <200210281237.g9SCbuZV093757@repoman.freebsd.org>
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http://perforce.freebsd.org/chv.cgi?CH=20283 Change 20283 by des@des.at.des.thinksec.com on 2002/10/28 04:37:44 Grammar nit + reorder entries. Affected files ... .. //depot/projects/openpam/doc/xsso_errata.txt#9 edit Differences ... ==== //depot/projects/openpam/doc/xsso_errata.txt#9 (text+ko) ==== @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -$P4: //depot/projects/openpam/doc/xsso_errata.txt#8 $ +$P4: //depot/projects/openpam/doc/xsso_errata.txt#9 $ Errata in XSSO, chapter 5: @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ p. 32: pam_acct_mgmt() must be allowed to return PAM_AUTH_ERR. p. 34: "PAM_AUTH_ERR" is misspelled as "PAM_AUTH_ERROR" in the - second-last line of the DESCRIPTION section. + second-to-last line of the DESCRIPTION section. p. 40: in the second paragraph of the DESCRIPTION section, the phrase "In this case the, [...]" should be "In this case, the [...]". @@ -24,12 +24,6 @@ p. 46: "PAM_AUTHOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHOK" in the DESCRIPTION section should be "PAM_AUTHTOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHTOK", respectively. -p. 60: "PAM_AUTHOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHOK" in the DESCRIPTION section - should be "PAM_AUTHTOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHTOK", respectively. - -p. 62: the target_authtok_len argument to pam_set_mapped_authtok() is - of type size_t, not a size_t *. - p. 52: PAM_CONV_ERR is listed out of order and with the explanatory text "Conversation failure" instead of "Conversation error". It is listed correctly on the next page. @@ -37,6 +31,12 @@ p. 59: the last argument pam_set_data() should be written void (*cleanup)(...), not void *(cleanup)(...). +p. 60: "PAM_AUTHOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHOK" in the DESCRIPTION section + should be "PAM_AUTHTOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHTOK", respectively. + +p. 62: the target_authtok_len argument to pam_set_mapped_authtok() is + of type size_t, not a size_t *. + p. 66: the first occurrence of "pam_acct_mgmt" in the NAME section should be "pam_sm_acct_mgmt". To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe p4-projects" in the body of the message
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