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Date:      Mon, 4 Jul 2005 00:04:03 +0100
From:      Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>
To:        Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
Cc:        freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article
Message-ID:  <20050703230403.GC52761@submonkey.net>
In-Reply-To: <200507032230.j63MUKEE011444@freefall.freebsd.org>
References:  <200507032230.j63MUKEE011444@freefall.freebsd.org>

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On Sun, Jul 03, 2005 at 10:30:20PM +0000, Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
> The following reply was made to PR www/82935; it has been noted by GNATS.
>=20
> From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
> To: Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk>
> Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
> Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops arti=
cle
> Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 01:30:02 +0300
>=20
>  On 2005-07-03 19:09, Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> wrote:
>  > --- article.sgml.diff begins here ---
>  > --- article.sgml.orig	Sun Jul  3 16:59:50 2005
>  > +++ article.sgml	Sun Jul  3 18:58:39 2005
>  > @@ -45,8 +45,11 @@
>  >        <ulink url=3D"http://gerda.univie.ac.at/freebsd-laptops/">The &=
os;
>  >        Laptop Compatibility List</ulink>.</para>
>  > =20
>  > -    <para>For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out
>  > -      the &a.mobile.name; list.</para>
>  > +    <para>If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users,
>  > +      checkout the &a.mobile.name; list.  You can also get additional
>  > +      information about using Laptops on &os; at
>  > +      <ulink url=3D"http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html">;
>  > +	http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html</ulink>.</para>;
> =20
>  Nice diff.  I only have a minor comment.  When the content of a <ulink>
>  element is just the URL itself, it's probably better to leave the
>  content of the element empty -- the stylesheets will take care of
>  duplicating the URL in the generated link, i.e.:
> =20
>  	<ulink url=3D"http://example.net/"></ulink>;
> =20
>  This doesn't duplicate the URL, making it double the effort to switch to
>  a different URL and twice as error-prone (i.e. update one but forget the
>  other).
> =20
>  If this looks ok to the rest of the -www people, I can commit it with
>  this minor change to the diff :-)

I'm happy with this, although "check out" is more correct than
"checkout".

Ceri
--=20
Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm
not sure about the former.			  -- Einstein (attrib.)

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