From owner-freebsd-www@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jul 3 23:04:06 2005 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2BE6B16A41C; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 23:04:06 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from setantae@submonkey.net) Received: from shrike.submonkey.net (cpc4-cdif2-3-1-cust199.cdif.cable.ntl.com [82.31.76.199]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 965D343D46; Sun, 3 Jul 2005 23:04:05 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from setantae@submonkey.net) Received: from setantae by shrike.submonkey.net with local (Exim 4.51 (FreeBSD)) id 1DpDVL-00087B-JX; Mon, 04 Jul 2005 00:04:03 +0100 Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 00:04:03 +0100 From: Ceri Davies To: Giorgos Keramidas Message-ID: <20050703230403.GC52761@submonkey.net> Mail-Followup-To: Ceri Davies , Giorgos Keramidas , freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org References: <200507032230.j63MUKEE011444@freefall.freebsd.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="f+W+jCU1fRNres8c" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <200507032230.j63MUKEE011444@freefall.freebsd.org> X-PGP: finger ceri@FreeBSD.org User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.9i Sender: Ceri Davies Cc: freebsd-www@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops article X-BeenThere: freebsd-www@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: FreeBSD Project Webmasters List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 03 Jul 2005 23:04:06 -0000 --f+W+jCU1fRNres8c Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sun, Jul 03, 2005 at 10:30:20PM +0000, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > The following reply was made to PR www/82935; it has been noted by GNATS. >=20 > From: Giorgos Keramidas > To: Daniel Gerzo > Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org > Subject: Re: www/82935: Update and fix english in FreeBSD on Laptops arti= cle > Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2005 01:30:02 +0300 >=20 > On 2005-07-03 19:09, Daniel Gerzo wrote: > > --- article.sgml.diff begins here --- > > --- article.sgml.orig Sun Jul 3 16:59:50 2005 > > +++ article.sgml Sun Jul 3 18:58:39 2005 > > @@ -45,8 +45,11 @@ > > The &= os; > > Laptop Compatibility List. > > =20 > > - For communications with other &os; laptop users, check out > > - the &a.mobile.name; list. > > + If you want to communicate with other &os; laptop users, > > + checkout the &a.mobile.name; list. You can also get additional > > + information about using Laptops on &os; at > > + > > + http://tuxmobil.org/mobile_bsd.html. > =20 > Nice diff. I only have a minor comment. When the content of a > element is just the URL itself, it's probably better to leave the > content of the element empty -- the stylesheets will take care of > duplicating the URL in the generated link, i.e.: > =20 > > =20 > This doesn't duplicate the URL, making it double the effort to switch to > a different URL and twice as error-prone (i.e. update one but forget the > other). > =20 > If this looks ok to the rest of the -www people, I can commit it with > this minor change to the diff :-) I'm happy with this, although "check out" is more correct than "checkout". Ceri --=20 Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former. -- Einstein (attrib.) --f+W+jCU1fRNres8c Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.1 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFCyG7jocfcwTS3JF8RAplKAJ0fJ01lX+yO47Nb3VD3Te+7J2SDCwCgoVez pa6BraQc06nOLb3kl8k90vY= =hl70 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --f+W+jCU1fRNres8c--