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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en/handbook README handbook.sgml
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nik         1998/10/12 14:56:18 PDT

  Modified files:
    en/handbook          README handbook.sgml 
  Log:
  Reviewing the use of <informalexample> and <screen>.
  
  In some cases <informalexample> wasn't appropriate, and the markup was
  changed to <programlisting> or other.
  
  In some cases there were spurious <para> elements before and after the
  <informalexample>. These were removed.
  
  Reformatted text within <screen> elements because the whitespace *is*
  significant.
  
  Added <prompt> and <userinput> elements within <screen> where necessary.
  
  If I spotted inappropriate use of markup within the immediate vicinity
  of the <informalexample> elements then I fixed that (mostly the use of
  <emphasis remap="...">).
  
  This is part one of these changes -- there's a load of them, and this
  goes up to line 11,284 or thereabouts, roughly one third of the way
  through.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.32      +21 -0     doc/en/handbook/README
  1.31      +1543 -1081doc/en/handbook/handbook.sgml

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