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Date:      Sun, 26 Jul 2015 09:24:50 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r47093 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors
Message-ID:  <201507260924.t6Q9OoTq044632@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: dru
Date: Sun Jul 26 09:24:49 2015
New Revision: 47093
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47093

Log:
  Fix redundancy.
  
  Sponsored by: Essen DevSummit Hackathon

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 26 09:17:32 2015	(r47092)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml	Sun Jul 26 09:24:49 2015	(r47093)
@@ -481,9 +481,9 @@ Comment out for now until these can be v
     <sect2 xml:id="svn-usage">
       <title>Running <application>Subversion</application></title>
 
-      <para>The <command>svn</command> command is used to fetch a
-	clean copy of the sources into a local directory.  The files
-	in this directory are called a <emphasis>local working
+      <para>To fetch a clean copy of the sources into a local
+	directory, use <command>svn</command>.  The files in this
+	directory are called a <emphasis>local working
 	  copy</emphasis>.</para>
 
       <warning>



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