From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jan 28 15:12:42 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 78A7516A417 for ; Mon, 28 Jan 2008 15:12:42 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from an-out-0708.google.com (an-out-0708.google.com [209.85.132.251]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 35CA113C442 for ; Mon, 28 Jan 2008 15:12:42 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: by an-out-0708.google.com with SMTP id c14so446337anc.13 for ; Mon, 28 Jan 2008 07:12:41 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to:subject:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; bh=wzqiA6cEr0uV6qmpr8hrR2/eV6Ln/F5YFXhlKNoeNIE=; b=eaeGg6m7iOVmRdpVjA/IaxoWfF+FL3vTTKs05poIYARgA9f962NlJZ2g7zNCg2LeXzwk5i6c/O5S8w4aT4yzWLT/Gf7tsejtq+b5OJ3aP9/sST2p8omMO4LQvRLPCAQLahLRGDzWe15qQMRE9OxVg17Fy0jY/f0DsKqEDCk1Q5A= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:to:subject:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; b=PJ5jBxpuTIU4gktZ0NKMroQrmOXTTEh7mcofEmgAqMsN3dLPqhcaA3uQLA0Qlfpr+U/Y0yL5h4zMc9oZ2PkpuFt79pB3G1+yFvSYiiNn7H8bGbyu/NL/nHkVZGO+hOa1/kKuKfkskJH2IZQWavZZEd7j7EoU5uGpUQAzjE2JDMw= Received: by 10.100.232.13 with SMTP id e13mr12089593anh.37.1201531593495; Mon, 28 Jan 2008 06:46:33 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.100.248.5 with HTTP; Mon, 28 Jan 2008 06:46:33 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <47d0403c0801280646h48e6d8e4kb948ac8399789799@mail.gmail.com> Date: Mon, 28 Jan 2008 09:46:33 -0500 From: "Ben Kaduk" To: doc@freebsd.org In-Reply-To: <20080122162126.GA89118@night.db.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <20080122214836.6688d8af@siro.jp-media-lab.com.local> <20080122132649.GD1467@haakonia.hitnet.RWTH-Aachen.DE> <4795F01B.6030209@FreeBSD.org> <20080122162126.GA89118@night.db.net> Cc: Subject: Re: I found an erratum X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 28 Jan 2008 15:12:42 -0000 On 1/22/08, Diane Bruce wrote: > On Tue, Jan 22, 2008 at 02:31:07PM +0100, G?bor K?vesd?n wrote: > > Christian Brueffer escribi?: > > >On Tue, Jan 22, 2008 at 09:48:36PM +0900, Hiroshi Saeki wrote: > > > > ... > > >Does that answer your email? In any case, thank you for the report! > > > > > Eeeek. I just changed it. Will revert. Sorry for the mess. I also > > thought it was a typo. > > As a native English speaker it made sense to me, but as we have a good > sized non-native English reading audience, it might be worth while re-wording. > Just a suggestion. > Sorry for jumping in a bit late, here, but it seems that one such re-wordings would be to s/under the hood/under-the-hood/ The hyphenation makes it more clear that there is an expression being used here, and is arguably more correct, anyways (though such an argument would probably be a waste of time). -Ben Kaduk