From owner-freebsd-doc Sun May 19 14:30:24 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DFDFF37B40A for ; Sun, 19 May 2002 14:30:01 -0700 (PDT) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.6/8.11.6) id g4JLU1G19650; Sun, 19 May 2002 14:30:01 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats) Received: from abigail.blackend.org (blackend.org [212.11.50.35]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 145FE37B401 for ; Sun, 19 May 2002 14:20:11 -0700 (PDT) Received: from abigail.blackend.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by abigail.blackend.org (8.12.3/8.12.3/ - 15/04/02) with ESMTP id g4JLHrYe008276 for ; Sun, 19 May 2002 23:17:53 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from marc@abigail.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by abigail.blackend.org (8.12.3/8.12.3/Submit) id g4JLHqN3008275; Sun, 19 May 2002 23:17:52 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <200205192117.g4JLHqN3008275@abigail.blackend.org> Date: Sun, 19 May 2002 23:17:52 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille Reply-To: Marc Fonvieille To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/38306: Various punctuation problems and a missing word in sections 2.9.11 and 2.9.13 of the Handbook Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 38306 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Various punctuation problems and a missing word in sections 2.9.11 and 2.9.13 of the Handbook >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun May 19 14:30:01 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Marc Fonvieille >Release: FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD abigail.blackend.org 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #5: Sun May 12 00:30:43 CEST 2002 marc@abigail.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/ABIGAIL i386 >Description: Various punctuation problems and a missing word in sections 2.9.11 and 2.9.13 of the Handbook. Read the patch below for more details. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml.diff begins here --- --- chapter.sgml.org Sun May 19 11:31:25 2002 +++ chapter.sgml Sun May 19 17:51:26 2002 @@ -3931,7 +3931,7 @@ Saving Configuration When you are satisfied, the configuration can now be saved. - Select Save the configuration and Exit + Select Save the configuration and Exit. The configuration file will be saved to /etc/XF86Config. @@ -4026,7 +4026,7 @@ keys and press Enter. A menu will display showing all the packages available for - the selection made. + the selection made:
Select Packages @@ -4040,7 +4040,7 @@ The bash shell is shown selected. Select as many as desired by highlighting the package and pressing - the Space. + the Space key. A short description of each package will appear in the lower left corner of the screen. @@ -4071,7 +4071,7 @@ Use the arrow keys to select [ Install ] and press Enter. You will then need to confirm - that you want to install the packages. + that you want to install the packages:
Confirm Package Installation --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message