From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Sun Feb 11 19:52:23 2018 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4D57AF126F3; Sun, 11 Feb 2018 19:52:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "Let's Encrypt Authority X3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id F298487C90; Sun, 11 Feb 2018 19:52:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id ED5E127734; Sun, 11 Feb 2018 19:52:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id w1BJqM9w015807; Sun, 11 Feb 2018 19:52:22 GMT (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id w1BJqMuD015805; Sun, 11 Feb 2018 19:52:22 GMT (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201802111952.w1BJqMuD015805@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: wblock set sender to wblock@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Warren Block Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 19:52:22 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r51414 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide X-SVN-Group: doc-head X-SVN-Commit-Author: wblock X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 51414 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: doc MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.25 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 11 Feb 2018 19:52:23 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Sun Feb 11 19:52:22 2018 New Revision: 51414 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51414 Log: Spelling corrections, tense improvements, possessive removals, and the removal of one really weak and labored pun. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/Makefile head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/Makefile ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/Makefile Sun Feb 11 05:50:22 2018 (r51413) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/Makefile Sun Feb 11 19:52:22 2018 (r51414) @@ -16,6 +16,9 @@ SRCS= article.xml IMAGES_LIB= callouts/1.png IMAGES_LIB+= callouts/2.png IMAGES_LIB+= callouts/3.png +IMAGES_LIB+= callouts/4.png +IMAGES_LIB+= callouts/5.png +IMAGES_LIB+= callouts/6.png URL_RELPREFIX?= ../../../.. DOC_PREFIX?= ${.CURDIR}/../../.. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sun Feb 11 05:50:22 2018 (r51413) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sun Feb 11 19:52:22 2018 (r51414) @@ -459,7 +459,7 @@ You need a Passphrase to protect your secret key. - Committers can aquire an additional bit by the usual + Committers can acquire an additional bit by the usual process of finding a mentor who will propose them to core, doceng, or portmgr, as appropriate. When approved, they will be added to 'access' and the normal mentoring period @@ -2121,9 +2121,9 @@ U stable/9/share/man/man4/netmap.4 while and is finally committed back to the original branch. During development code migration in one direction (from head to the branch only). No code is committed back to head - until the end. Once the branch is commited back at the end, + until the end. After the branch is committed back at the end, it is dead (although a new branch with the same name can be - created after the dead one was deleted). + created after the dead one is deleted). As per https://people.FreeBSD.org/~peter/svn_notes.txt, @@ -2677,7 +2677,7 @@ freebsd-mfc-after = 2 weeks Commit Log for a Commit Bringing in Code from OpenBSD - Commiting some code based on work done in the + Committing some code based on work done in the OpenBSD project. ... @@ -4993,21 +4993,21 @@ Do you want to commit? (no = start a shell) [y/n]ports/Mk/bsd.port*.mk so do not commit changes to those files unless you want to face - their wra(i)th. + their wrath. What is the proper procedure for updating the - checksum for a port's distfile when the file changes + checksum for a port distfile when the file changes without a version change? When the checksum for a distribution file is updated due to the author updating the file without changing the - port's revision, the commit message includes a + port revision, the commit message includes a summary of the relevant diffs between the original and new distfile to ensure that the distfile has not been corrupted or maliciously altered. If the current