From owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jan 4 21:40:32 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6AFF51065672; Mon, 4 Jan 2010 21:40:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gabor@FreeBSD.org) Received: from server.mypc.hu (server.mypc.hu [87.229.73.95]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0CB028FC14; Mon, 4 Jan 2010 21:40:31 +0000 (UTC) Received: from server.mypc.hu (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by server.mypc.hu (Postfix) with ESMTP id 323DF14DA171; Mon, 4 Jan 2010 22:40:30 +0100 (CET) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at server.mypc.hu Received: from server.mypc.hu ([127.0.0.1]) by server.mypc.hu (server.mypc.hu [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with LMTP id IPVgrn1tDdCs; Mon, 4 Jan 2010 22:40:17 +0100 (CET) Received: from [192.168.1.105] (catv-89-132-179-104.catv.broadband.hu [89.132.179.104]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-CAMELLIA256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by server.mypc.hu (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 88B7B14D7D8F; Mon, 4 Jan 2010 22:40:17 +0100 (CET) Message-ID: <4B42603E.6000503@FreeBSD.org> Date: Mon, 04 Jan 2010 22:40:14 +0100 From: Gabor Kovesdan User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows; U; Windows NT 5.2; es-ES; rv:1.9.1.5) Gecko/20091204 Thunderbird/3.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Doug Barton References: <201001042038.o04KcFo8028508@repoman.freebsd.org> <4B425D7A.7030101@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <4B425D7A.7030101@FreeBSD.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Cc: Gavin Atkinson , cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: **OBSOLETE** CVS commit messages for the entire tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 04 Jan 2010 21:40:32 -0000 El 2010. 01. 04. 22:28, Doug Barton escribió: > Gavin Atkinson wrote: > >> On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote: >> >>> dougb 2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC >>> >>> Modified files: >>> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml >>> Log: >>> Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script >>> did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an >>> unexpanded example. >>> >>> Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup. >>> >> >>> Unless there is a good reason to start the service >>> earlier all ports scripts should use >>> - REQUIRE: LOGIN. If the service >>> + REQUIRE: LOGIN If the service >>> runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory. >>> >> This is now grammatically incorrect. I actually think the original is >> better than any rewording I can come up with. >> > Take a quick look at the page before it auto-updates. The old way the > period ends up all by itself in the text after the programlisting box, > so it looks like this: > I would suggest the following: Unless there is a good reason to start the service earlier all ports scripts should use the following: REQUIRE: LOGIN If the service ... Cheers, -- Gabor Kovesdan FreeBSD Volunteer EMAIL: gabor@FreeBSD.org .:|:. gabor@kovesdan.org WEB: http://people.FreeBSD.org/~gabor .:|:. http://kovesdan.org