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From: Peter Johnson <freebsd@bilogic.org>
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Subject: docs/29655: minor comment fixes in doc/share/sgml/freebsd.dsl
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>Number:         29655
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       minor comment fixes in doc/share/sgml/freebsd.dsl
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Aug 12 19:20:00 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Peter Johnson
>Release:        4.3-STABLE
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD matrix.bilogic.org 4.3-STABLE FreeBSD 4.3-STABLE #6: Sun Jul  1 20:41:50 CDT 2001     peter@matrix.bilogic.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WORKSTATION  i386

>Description:
There's a typo in the new authorgroup stuff (chapter1info instead of
chapterinfo).
And the comment for sgmltag is in the wrong place (the authorgroup stuff
was inserted in between the comment and the sgmltag code).
>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
Patch:
--- doc/share/sgml/freebsd.dsl	Sun Aug 12 21:11:25 2001
+++ doc/share/sgml/freebsd.dsl.patched	Sun Aug 12 21:12:33 2001
@@ -386,14 +386,6 @@
 
       <!-- Slightly deeper customisations -->
 
-      <!-- I want things marked up with 'sgmltag' eg., 
-
-              <para>You can use <sgmltag>para</sgmltag> to indicate
-                paragraphs.</para>
-
-           to automatically have the opening and closing braces inserted,
-           and it should be in a mono-spaced font. -->
-
       <!-- We would like the author attributions to show up in line
            with the section they refer to.  Authors who made the same
            contribution should be listed in a single <authorgroup> and 
@@ -401,7 +393,7 @@
            element that describes what the whole authorgroup was
            responsible for.  For example:
 
-           <chapter1info>
+           <chapterinfo>
              <authorgroup>
                <author>
                  <firstname>Bob</firstname>
@@ -464,6 +456,14 @@
         (custom-authorgroup))
       (element (sect5info authorgroup)
         (custom-authorgroup))
+
+      <!-- I want things marked up with 'sgmltag' eg., 
+
+              <para>You can use <sgmltag>para</sgmltag> to indicate
+                paragraphs.</para>
+
+           to automatically have the opening and closing braces inserted,
+           and it should be in a mono-spaced font. -->
 
       (element sgmltag ($mono-seq$
           (make sequence
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