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Date:      Sat, 13 Apr 2019 19:08:47 +0000
From:      Alexey Dokuchaev <danfe@freebsd.org>
To:        Cy Schubert <cy@freebsd.org>
Cc:        ports-committers@freebsd.org, svn-ports-all@freebsd.org, svn-ports-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r498823 - head/security/aide
Message-ID:  <20190413190847.GA13742@FreeBSD.org>
In-Reply-To: <201904131859.x3DIxlrw088246@repo.freebsd.org>
References:  <201904131859.x3DIxlrw088246@repo.freebsd.org>

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On Sat, Apr 13, 2019 at 06:59:47PM +0000, Cy Schubert wrote:
> New Revision: 498823
> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/ports/498823
> 
> Log:
>   More accurately reflect what aide is in COMMENT and pkg-descr.
> 
> Modified:
>   head/security/aide/Makefile   (contents, props changed)
>   head/security/aide/pkg-descr   (contents, props changed)
> 
> ...
> @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ CATEGORIES=	security
>  MASTER_SITES=	https://github.com/aide/aide/releases/download/v${PORTVERSION}/
>  
>  MAINTAINER=	cy@FreeBSD.org
> -COMMENT=	Replacement and extension for Tripwire
> +COMMENT=	A file and directory integrity checker

Violation of the PHB paragraph 5.6 -- Do not start [COMMENT] with an
indefinite article (that is, A or An).

> @@ -1,5 +1,12 @@
> -AIDE is Advanced Intrusion Detection Environment.
> -This piece of software was written as a replacement and extension
> -for Tripwire.
> +AIDE is Advanced Intrusion Detection Environment.  AIDE
> +(Advanced Intrusion Detection Environment, [eyd]) is a file and
> +directory integrity checker.

Why do you have to repeat "Advanced Intrusion Detection Environment" twice
in the same sentence?

./danfe



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