Date: Fri, 29 Mar 2002 10:00:04 -0800 (PST) From: swear@blarg.net (Gary W. Swearingen) To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/36465: [PATCH] dumpon(8) Message-ID: <200203291800.g2TI04988470@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/36465; it has been noted by GNATS. From: swear@blarg.net (Gary W. Swearingen) To: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com> Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/36465: [PATCH] dumpon(8) Date: 29 Mar 2002 09:52:17 -0800 Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com> writes: > Could you review this diff, see if this will be good for ya? > My mdoc(7) skills arn't the best in the world ;) Nor are mine, making testing a required part of patching. Your diff looks good, except that the sentence starting "In such cases use" (see below) should be removed too (it was incorporated in the new part). +.Xr loader 8 +must be used to enable dumps for system panics during kernel initialization. In such cases use .Va dumpdev And if you don't mind, you could remove a possible (but nonsensical) second meaning in the new text by inserting "which occur" between "panics" and "during" (see above). Thanks. To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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