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Date:      Sun, 23 Sep 2001 03:26:10 +0200
From:      Piet Delport <siberiyan@mweb.co.za>
To:        freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Subject:   Minor cleanups in fdisk.8
Message-ID:  <20010923032610.A24014@athalon>

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Hi,

I've attached a patch that cleans up the fdisk(8) manpage (of my
frequently-cvsupped 4-STABLE system) a bit, correcting mainly
grammatical and cosmetic mistakes.  This is my first patch, and the
first time i've worked with mdoc, so i don't want to send-pr it just
yet.

Can someone with experience comment on it, pointing out any obvious
mistakes and such?

Thanks,

--=20
Piet Delport <siberiyan@mweb.co.za>
Today's subliminal thought is:

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--- sbin/i386/fdisk/fdisk.8.orig	Thu Aug 16 13:35:43 2001
+++ sbin/i386/fdisk/fdisk.8	Sun Sep 23 02:42:24 2001
@@ -131,10 +131,11 @@
 .Ql ad0 ,
 and
 .Ql da0
-are being searched in that order, until one is
-being found responding.
+are searched in that order, until one is found to respond.
 .Pp
-When called with no arguments, it prints the sector 0 partition table.
+When called with no arguments,=20
+.Nm
+prints the sector 0 partition table.
 An example follows:
 .Bd -literal
 	******* Working on device /dev/ad0 *******
@@ -180,18 +181,17 @@
 .It Em "flag 80"
 specifies that this is the active partition.
 .It Em cyl , sector No and Em head
-fields are used to specify the beginning address
-and end address for the partition.
+fields are used to specify the beginning and end addresses of the partitio=
n.
 .It Em Note :
 these numbers are calculated using BIOS's understanding of the disk geomet=
ry
 and saved in the bootblock.
 .El
 .Pp
-The flags
+The
 .Fl i
 or
 .Fl u
-are used to indicate that the partition data is to be updated, unless the
+flags are used to indicate that the partition data is to be updated, unles=
s the
 .Fl f
 option is used.  If the
 .Fl f
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@
 selects defaults for its questions to guarantee the above behavior.
 .Pp
 It displays each partition
-and ask if you want to edit it.
+and asks whether you want to edit it.
 If you say yes,
 it will step through each field showing the old value
 and asking for a new one.
@@ -227,20 +227,18 @@
 .Em active
 partition.
 Finally,
-when the all the data for the first sector has been accumulated,
-you are asked if you really want to rewrite sector 0.
-Only if you answer yes,
-will the data be written to disk.
+when all the data for sector 0 has been accumulated,
+you are asked to confirm whether you really want to rewrite it.
 .Pp
 The difference between the
 .Fl u
-flag and
+and
 .Fl i
-flag is that
+flags is that
 the
 .Fl u
-flag just edits the fields as they appear on the disk.
-While the
+flag just edits (updates) the fields as they appear on the disk,
+while the
 .Fl i
 flag is used to "initialize" sector 0;
 it will setup the last BIOS partition to use the whole disk for
@@ -248,9 +246,9 @@
 and make it active.
 .Sh NOTES
 The automatic calculation of starting cylinder etc. uses
-a set of figures that represent what the BIOS thinks is the
-geometry of the drive.
-These figures are by default taken from the incore disklabel,
+a set of figures that represent what the BIOS thinks the
+geometry of the drive is.
+These figures are taken from the incore disklabel by default,
 but the program initially gives you an opportunity to change them.
 This allows the user to create a bootblock that can work with drives
 that use geometry translation under the BIOS.
@@ -276,7 +274,7 @@
 from a
 .Ar configfile .
 The syntax of this file is very simple.  Each line is either a comment or
-a specification, and whitespace (except for newlines) are ignored:
+a specification, and whitespace (except for newlines) is not significant:
 .Bl -tag -width Ds
 .It Xo
 .Ic #

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