Date: Mon, 14 Jul 2008 16:56:06 +0800 From: Ganbold <ganbold@micom.mng.net> To: remko@elvandar.org Cc: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@freebsd.org>, doc-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-doc@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml Message-ID: <487B14A6.2090800@micom.mng.net> In-Reply-To: <cf2972980716a1f4b483aa594ba29ae4.squirrel@galain.elvandar.org> References: <200807131823.m6DINv82033146@repoman.freebsd.org> <487B096D.3050802@micom.mng.net> <cf2972980716a1f4b483aa594ba29ae4.squirrel@galain.elvandar.org>
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Remko Lodder wrote: > On Mon, July 14, 2008 10:08 am, Ganbold wrote: > >> Tom Rhodes wrote: >> >>> trhodes 2008-07-13 18:23:57 UTC >>> >>> FreeBSD doc repository >>> >>> Modified files: >>> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml >>> Log: >>> Rewrite the IPsec section to bring it up to date and make it easier to >>> get a VPN up and running. While here, remove discussion on FAST_IPSEC >>> since it's no longer a valid kernel option. >>> >>> PR: 121863 >>> Quick review by: remko >>> >>> Revision Changes Path >>> 1.324 +293 -829 >>> doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml >>> _______________________________________________ >>> cvs-all@freebsd.org mailing list >>> http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all >>> To unsubscribe, send any mail to "cvs-all-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >> Tom, >> >> I think you meant: >> >> <para>At this point, both networks should be available and >> seem to be part of the same network. Most likely both >> networks are protected by a firewall, as they should be. To >> - allow traffic to flow between them, rules need to be added >> + allow traffic flow between them, rules need to be added >> >> Maybe I'm wrong here. >> >> thanks, >> >> Ganbold >> > > I think the current line is right. "Traffic to flow" means that it "can > happen", traffic flow means that it happends... > You are right, probably I have just misunderstood the whole sentence's meaning while translating :) Ganbold > Cheers > remko > > -- Psychiatrists say that one out of four people are mentally ill. Check three friends. If they're OK, you're it.
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