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Date:      Sun, 28 Aug 2011 22:12:29 -0600 (MDT)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To:        Garrett Cooper <yanegomi@gmail.com>
Cc:        freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: docs/160269: [patch] Handbook wireless section: sand off some rough edges
Message-ID:  <alpine.BSF.2.00.1108282110580.39681@wonkity.com>
In-Reply-To: <201108290130.p7T1UFLj020449@freefall.freebsd.org>
References:  <201108290130.p7T1UFLj020449@freefall.freebsd.org>

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On Mon, 29 Aug 2011, Garrett Cooper wrote:

> The following reply was made to PR docs/160269; it has been noted by GNATS.
>
> From: Garrett Cooper <yanegomi@gmail.com>
> >
> > <note>
> > - <para>If the <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> is set up
> > + <para>If <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> is set up
> > with the line <literal>ifconfig_wlan0="DHCP"</literal>
> > - then it is no need to run the
> > - <command>dhclient</command> command manually,
> > + then it is not necessary to run the
> > + <command>dhclient</command> command manually.
>
> This isn't entirely true. You can specify other options like
> "SYNCDHCP", "ssid <foo> DHCP", etc, and it will achieve what's
> described below. Manual execution of dhclient in general should be
> discouraged for most users.

Changes made; I also found "plumbs the keys" to make my brain hurt.

> > <para>EAP does not come with an encryption method,  it was
> > decided to embed EAP inside an encrypted tunnel. Many
> > -types of EAP authentication methods have been designed,
> > -the most common methods are EAP-TLS, EAP-TTLS and
> > +types of EAP authentication methods have been designed.
> > +The most common methods are EAP-TLS, EAP-TTLS and
> > EAP-PEAP.</para>
>
> Maybe it should say something like "There are many EAP authentication
> methods: the most common ones are EAP-TLS, EAP-TTLS, and EAP-PEAP" ?

Done, but slightly differently.  The preceding sentence also had 
problems.

> > <para>EAP-TLS (EAP with Transport Layer Security) is a
> > @@ -1555,7 +1555,7 @@
> > 0<callout arearefs=3D"co-ttls-cacert">
> > <para>The <literal>ca_cert</literal> field indicates
> > the pathname of the CA certificate file. This file
> > -is needed to verify the server certificat.</para>
> > +is needed to verify the server certificate.</para>
> > </callout>
> >
> > <callout arearefs="co-ttls-pha2">
> > @@ -1599,10 +1599,10 @@
> >
> > <para>PEAP (Protected EAP) has been designed as an
> > alternative to EAP-TTLS. There are two types of PEAP
> > -methods, the most common one is PEAPv0/EAP-MSCHAPv2. In
> > +methods; the most common one is PEAPv0/EAP-MSCHAPv2. In
>
> That could be a colon instead.

The alternate type is never mentioned, so it's pointless to say that 
there are two.  Instead, let's just say PEAPv0/EAP-MSCHAPv2 is the most 
common.  This is actually an aside in the paragraph, so let's move it to 
a <note> just before the paragraph.

> This sentence is extremely wordy.

Yes, and poorly organized.  Better with the rewrite.

> The rest of the changes are good incremental improvements to the
> existing doc :).

Thanks!  Second version of the patch attached, which I think addresses 
both these and Mr. Kaduk's comments.  Also removed one pointless 
"simply".
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