Date: Tue, 30 Sep 2008 11:21:41 +0800 From: Ganbold <ganbold@micom.mng.net> To: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent Message-ID: <48E19B45.6060903@micom.mng.net> In-Reply-To: <20080928202152.19c1b3da.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> References: <200809281254.m8SCsE38033076@repoman.freebsd.org> <87od28mlk6.fsf@kobe.laptop> <20080928202152.19c1b3da.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
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Tom Rhodes wrote: > On Sun, 28 Sep 2008 16:44:57 +0300 > Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> wrote: > > >> On Sun, 28 Sep 2008 12:54:12 +0000 (UTC), Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> wrote: >> >>> trhodes 2008-09-28 12:54:12 UTC >>> >>> FreeBSD doc repository >>> >>> Modified files: >>> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent >>> Log: >>> Add the DTrace, file systems, and Updating chapters to the build. They >>> need a bit more fleshing out, but there is no reason why they should >>> remain local patches anymore. >>> >>> Reviewed by: remko, pgj, manolis, keramida >>> >> Thanks! These are nice chapters, and now we have something cool to >> point users to when they ask about DTrace and ZFS :) >> >> >> > > Can't wait to point people at work toward this. :) > > Thanks for you help with this! > > Another small thing, in updating chapter: ... compare the system against a secure disk. Such as a DVD or securely stored external USB disk device. ... I guess it should be one sentence like "...disk such as a DVD or..." Maybe I'm wrong here. thanks, Ganbold
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