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Date: Sat, 16 Feb 2002 19:11:41 +0200
From: Alexey Zelkin <phantom@ark.cris.net>
To: Will Andrews <will@csociety.org>
Cc: doc@FreeBSD.ORG, portmgr@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: Request for review: contributors/article.sgml; reveal portmgr
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hi,

Patch is ok. But I don't think that removing reference to
&a.portmgr; is good idea. What about rephrasing to something
like "&a.portmgr; <para>which includes:</para> ...."

On Sat, Feb 16, 2002 at 12:06:32PM -0500, Will Andrews wrote:
> On Sat, Feb 16, 2002 at 12:03:38PM -0500, Will Andrews wrote:
> > I've attached a diff to reveal the members of portmgr to the
> > world via contributors/article.sgml (also include what I
> > *think* is a fix for entity usage).
> 
> Argh!  I forgot the patch.
> 
> -- 
> wca

> Index: article.sgml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/article.sgml,v
> retrieving revision 1.98
> diff -u -r1.98 article.sgml
> --- article.sgml	13 Feb 2002 13:05:16 -0000	1.98
> +++ article.sgml	16 Feb 2002 05:20:18 -0000
> @@ -1736,7 +1736,7 @@
>  	<listitem>
>  	  <para>Principal: &a.peter;</para>
>  
> -	  <para>Assistants: &a.markm;, &a.joe</para>
> +	  <para>Assistants: &a.markm;, &a.joe;</para>
>  	</listitem>
>        </varlistentry>
>  
> @@ -1745,7 +1745,12 @@
>  	    Manager</ulink></term>
>  
>  	<listitem>
> -	  <para>&a.portmgr;</para>
> +	  <para>&a.ade;</para>
> +	  <para>&a.asami;</para>
> +	  <para>&a.kris;</para>
> +	  <para>&a.sobomax;</para>
> +	  <para>&a.steve;</para>
> +	  <para>&a.will;</para>
>  	</listitem>
>        </varlistentry>
>  


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