Date: Wed, 12 Aug 2009 16:24:04 +0100 From: Gavin Atkinson <gavin@FreeBSD.org> To: Remko Lodder <remko@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems Message-ID: <1250090644.17787.26.camel@buffy.york.ac.uk> In-Reply-To: <47250f3bd832228bf46c982ff5558492.squirrel@www.jr-hosting.nl> References: <200908110710.n7B7AElC070789@repoman.freebsd.org> <47250f3bd832228bf46c982ff5558492.squirrel@www.jr-hosting.nl>
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On Tue, 2009-08-11 at 09:16 +0200, Remko Lodder wrote: > On Tue, August 11, 2009 9:10 am, Remko Lodder wrote: > > remko 2009-08-11 07:10:14 UTC > > > > FreeBSD doc repository > > > > Modified files: > > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems chapter.sgml > > Log: > > Tidy up the ZFS section a bit, adjust the RAID-Z example from two to > > three > > drives and add a warning that the suggested configuration is between > > three > > to nine disks. > > > > PR: 135983 > > > > Revision Changes Path > > 1.6 +27 -14 > > doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.sgml > > > > I am doubting a bit whether the <warning> should be a <footnote> instead. > If people have suggestions, please let me know so that we can make it best > as possible ;) http://people.freebsd.org/~gavin/PRs/135983.2.diff That's basically a combination of both of our patches. It fixes some whitespace issues, rewords a little bit, fixes a capitalisation bug and changes more numbers to words. Thanks, Gavin
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