From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Feb 15 03:55:36 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DF2331065670; Wed, 15 Feb 2012 03:55:36 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-we0-f182.google.com (mail-we0-f182.google.com [74.125.82.182]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4C4E78FC08; Wed, 15 Feb 2012 03:55:35 +0000 (UTC) Received: by werm13 with SMTP id m13so576241wer.13 for ; Tue, 14 Feb 2012 19:55:35 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc:content-type; bh=p8zjvTF4uenh/B6HzJ+CB+/GTHwUNs+ShSEEIBJgelk=; b=JymG5M+tUBZPKx9Qb/lWodSBZ26Ae8U5eFMZw7rOaHDaXPSyyz9L7CvS7Gvcuc4R/L Z4zE6ULlMglf0LldbfMCpGmSvluHVZlhdBrMNCa8WrBKqBtuIOVxAwo5CdVy8F9k5G+R H2XWx67ANqFZERl1pRvPPmwVYlddlPu/A7zvU= Received: by 10.180.90.194 with SMTP id by2mr33131161wib.5.1329278135204; Tue, 14 Feb 2012 19:55:35 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.223.15.90 with HTTP; Tue, 14 Feb 2012 19:55:05 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: <4F3B2A7A.3030505@FreeBSD.org> References: <4F3B2A7A.3030505@FreeBSD.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Tue, 14 Feb 2012 22:55:05 -0500 Message-ID: To: Doug Barton Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 X-Gm-Message-State: ALoCoQk1XqHVD5rdAkvH2owQInSKh6gtbP1T1mOSCquh3bsUNzC4COYoUUab1X3h7fVJnQjz98Id Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: CfR: config chapter changes X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 15 Feb 2012 03:55:37 -0000 On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 10:46 PM, Doug Barton wrote: > On 02/14/2012 19:36, Eitan Adler wrote: >> What about the following? > > For my taste it's still a little too wordy .... In looking this over I > have some ideas, but can't really put work into it right atm, is > updating this urgent? If not, what's your time frame? I'd like to commit some changes in the next week or so and would be happy to continue making improvements in the future. On the other hand this isn't urgent by any sense of the word. -- Eitan Adler