From owner-freebsd-doc Sat May 4 7:40:32 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from rhadamanth.submonkey.net (pc4-card4-0-cust162.cdf.cable.ntl.com [80.4.14.162]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D2C7737B41F for ; Sat, 4 May 2002 07:40:04 -0700 (PDT) Received: from setantae by rhadamanth.submonkey.net with local (Exim 3.36 #1) id 1740hf-0001WV-00 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Sat, 04 May 2002 15:40:03 +0100 Date: Sat, 4 May 2002 15:40:03 +0100 From: Ceri Davies To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Clarification on the Handbook's Preface Message-ID: <20020504144003.GA5163@submonkey.net> Mail-Followup-To: Ceri Davies , doc@FreeBSD.org Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.3.28i Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org From doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml : Chapter 1, Introduction Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the history of the FreeBSD Project, the goals, development model, and everything else they've done for the FreeBSD project. Does anybody else want to join me in a rousing chorus of "What?!" ? The last line doesn't seem to make any sense whatsoever, and I can't fathom what it's trying to get at. If anyone does know what that text wants to say, could they fix it, otherwise how about the following patch ? --- preface.sgml.old Sat May 4 15:38:13 2002 +++ preface.sgml Sat May 4 15:38:04 2002 @@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ Introduces FreeBSD to a new user. It describes the history of the FreeBSD Project, the goals, development model, - and everything else they've done for the FreeBSD project. + and other aspects of the project. Ceri -- get the cool shoe shine To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message