Date: Tue, 05 Jan 2010 18:47:48 +0100 From: Rene Ladan <rene@freebsd.org> To: Doug Barton <dougb@FreeBSD.org> Cc: Gabor Kovesdan <gabor@freebsd.org>, Gavin Atkinson <gavin@FreeBSD.org>, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml Message-ID: <4B437B44.9060308@freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: <4B425D7A.7030101@FreeBSD.org> References: <201001042038.o04KcFo8028508@repoman.freebsd.org> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1001042109440.41098@ury.york.ac.uk> <4B425D7A.7030101@FreeBSD.org>
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On 04-01-2010 22:28, Doug Barton wrote: > Gavin Atkinson wrote: >> On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote: >>> dougb 2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC >>> >>> Modified files: >>> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml >>> Log: >>> Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script >>> did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an >>> unexpanded example. >>> >>> Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup. >> >>> <para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service >>> earlier all ports scripts should use >>> - <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service >>> + <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service >>> runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory. >> >> This is now grammatically incorrect. I actually think the original is >> better than any rewording I can come up with. > > Take a quick look at the page before it auto-updates. The old way the > period ends up all by itself in the text after the programlisting box, > so it looks like this: > > . If the service > This feels like working around some bug/shortcoming in the markup engine to me (?) The source text never knows the dimensions and font of the resulting output (computer screen/paper/pda/...). Regards, Rene -- http://www.rene-ladan.nl/ GPG fingerprint = ADBC ECCD EB5F A6B4 549F 600D 8C9E 647A E564 2BFC (subkeys.pgp.net)
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